Emerson

Ah a flash back...This is good ^.^ And I have nothing else.

While I'm waiting for the audio to load on my dial up, I'll write my comments. Lovely as always. Really, what more have I to say?

I only have two words to say: Navel gazing. If you don't know what I'm talking about do a YWS search for those words, Snoink has a thread somewhere...

Merci to everyone, and most of all to WD since you critiqued at request and gave such a lovely response! I'll take in everything everyone said and with any luck ...

his eyes glued to the scream A humorous typo. Gosh....Flash backs are so scrumdiddlie-omtious. (I hate trying to spell that word...)

omgz Das ist so gud! Keep it up!

I want to hug Jon and make it all feel better for him... I think this is really good mental torture. Not only does Jon not know what is real, ...

I think it's funny how I still get comments.... Yeah, I didn't get those dread locks. I really planned on it though! Thanks everyone.

golly goodness. This is like joy, and joyness... And yes, I second the fact that kyle better be real! I love how Jon seriously believes he is crazy now. Such ...

*shivers* gah. This is so amazingly edible!!! You used to think you were beaten by an anamorph And that sounds hilarious.

*squeal* This is really good... Oddly enough, I don't miss kyle. I still want to know what is going on with him though. When can we expect kylosexual shirts to ...

I hate being one of the choir to just give tips and not actually critique, but, you should consider reading this: Before You Post...

The wnd willing me to jump. a typo, me thinks? I liked the scientific ending to it. Twas cute. should the second line end in a period?

Reminds me of Salome ...lol. I liked it, though the total lack of capitalization bugged me but but at the same time, it's cool and it works.

They're so mean to Jon...! And if this is Kyle's story, where is he?