Young Writers Society

It's strange..
:S
I like it
The name caught my eye...
Typical emo girl
Hehe physics?
I don't get it :S
I'm not logical enough

I like how you made yourself seem so vulnerable. Did you really have a dream about suicide? I like how to gave the wind personification you made the poem sound even cooler by doing that. Overall it was short, but very well written

I agree with everything good everyone else said xD

Great work (:

lmao! XD you're brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

Amusing, and I liked how it showed the tie in to the backward haunting thoughts of your mind. I wish there weren't so many capitals, but the format make sense for the sake of adding an independently standing and important phrase.

Your latest poems are witty; you've found your simple style. But I'd like to see a bit more in the next effort.

Well written!! Great ending left suspense! Is the 2nd line suppose to end in anything?? Otherwise I think it was great... I have had dreams like that.

*ugh, physics* Now that my dislike for physics is out of the way

The ending was great. I thought of it as a light ending, definately like something that would happen in a dream, but I can see how it could be a little sadder, if you so choose.

I read it at first (ignoring the punctuation for some strange reason) and wanted to put a period after "cliff" and make the next line the start of a new sentence. And then I went back and wondered how I could ignore punctuation in the first place. Just a thought if you're looking for something else to filter through your brain.

Haha, good twist on the emo poem.

It was funny. In an odd sort of way.

Prokaryote

*smiles*

I liked it, thats all i can say really.

Okay Snoink once again you've made me smile, but thats not good today (my face is sunburned)

I couldn't stop laughing when I read this, it just sounds like one of those things that I would write if I had any decent skill in poetry.

This is defiently a pick me up poem.

I read it and got ot the edge of my seat than read the last part and felt like smacking my head against the desk.

A good thing

I like it. Surprise ending woot!

I laughed, at first, but then I realized that's actually a brilliant thought, too. Very clever combination. It could really go either way, you know? Potential energy turns into kinetic energy as the narrator jumps, but it could also be another way of saying, "What do I still have to contribute to the world?"

Maybe I'm overthinking it. XD Love it.

You have a brilliant sense of humour Snoink and, I think, a deep hatred of physics. If they combine to give this sort of poetry then you should be forced to go to class more often! Hehe. Anyway, I liked it a lot and physics just happens to be my least favourite subject.

It's short, but I actually really like the concept. And, like everyone else said, I laughed out loud too. ^_^

This made me laugh out loud. Very nice. Me likey.

Thanks for spotting the typo! It was right when I wrote it down on paper, but alas! It didn't transcribe.

Yes... hehehe... too much physics.

I think that "wnd" was supposed to be wind. Make sure you profread your pieces. I like it very much!

ROFL someone has gone to physics class recently... That's great, amiga. I love it.

The wnd willing me to jump.