with a single kiss...
with a single kiss
the temples topple
and Solomon's head
is served on a plate
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Ahh... but Solomon is capitalized, no?
Hehehe... yes! Somebody got the Salome reference. Mwha.
Reminds me of Salome...lol.
I liked it, though the total lack of capitalization bugged me but but at the same time, it's cool and it works.