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with a single kiss...

by Snoink

with a single kiss...

with a single kiss
the temples topple
and Solomon's head
is served on a plate

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Sun May 06, 2007 9:48 pm
Snoink says...

Ahh... but Solomon is capitalized, no? ;)

Hehehe... yes! Somebody got the Salome reference. Mwha.

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Sun May 06, 2007 8:13 pm
Emerson says...

Reminds me of Salome...lol.

I liked it, though the total lack of capitalization bugged me but but at the same time, it's cool and it works.

Nothing is impossible, for the word itself says, 'I'm possible!'
— Audrey Hepburn