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with a single kiss...

by Snoink


with a single kiss...


with a single kiss
the temples topple
and Solomon's head
is served on a plate

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Sun May 06, 2007 9:48 pm
Snoink says...



Ahh... but Solomon is capitalized, no? ;)

Hehehe... yes! Somebody got the Salome reference. Mwha.




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Sun May 06, 2007 8:13 pm
Emerson says...



Reminds me of Salome...lol.

I liked it, though the total lack of capitalization bugged me but but at the same time, it's cool and it works.





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