Emerson

I think if you're wanting to introduce a list of reasons for being loved, this fits nicely. Now I think it’s time the good was returned to you. [s]So[/s] I ...

Hello there Beemarie! First of all, please don't "bump" your own posts! What this means, is don't post saying, "Will someone say something!" Be patient, reviews will come. Or you ...

Hello there! Is there any way you could get rid of the giant gaps between each line? It makes reading strange. I think this is a really beautiful idea, but ...

Hello there! Here are some quick tips before I get into the actual critique: -Try not to use -ly adjectives too often, especially when they're not needed at all. "I ...

I have to say the Russian in your title caught my attention. :D Even though I love it, I think you might want to consider using a title that your ...

This is a great start! Aren't pianos lovely? I won't have too much advice because there is one thing I can highlight more than anything else. You love the piano, ...

Hello there! I don't generally review Sci-Fi, so I guess you're lucky! Where it really [s]it really[/s] proved its worth was in the radiation zones they were deployed [s]was out[/s] ...

This is interesting but also incredebly strange. I'll begin the critique. ^_^ I just keep staring at the [s]booking[/s] book in my hands, Is this what you meant? In the ...

Hey there! Even though you put this in "other" I'm going to review it a bit like a poem because it seems to fit that area most. :) This is ...

Hi there Carolinewashere! [s]As if t[/s] T ossed in bed, we cling to each other. Be more assertive! No, "as if"s, make a statement! :) It helps. Being nonspecific in ...

I read this along with 1984 and Brave New World for my Brit Lit class over the summer. I thought it was amazing, and it was my favorite book out ...

Ze'a mer erszty idje. You have no idea what I just said, but I do. Basically, like everyone else. Speaking in foreign languages or things that sound cool is so ...

Hey there! I just wanted to let you know that I shortened your line break (the ~~~~ things). If you make them too long they can stretch out the front ...

Suzanne: This is a wedding! Why must yall be party killers? I snorted when I read that. I mean, really, why would I say yall? :P It's cute!

Hullo there! I just wanted to let you know that I shortened your line break, which is the thing that has all the ~~~~ in it. If you make this ...