Emerson

I liked it 'Manda :-D It didn't always read nicely, but the poem its self was good. I don't really have much to say. I'm not in a very good ...

*Screams* BRAD I HATE YOU SO MUCH! But I love Ch so much... *melts with love* wtf? She wants to have the fear of snow? *screws up eyes* I hate ...

This was really powerful, I liked reading it. Just like crysi said, very well written. An fading flower-patterned couch groaned as I leaned against it. that 'an' should be 'a' ...

The subject matter is fleeting. What are you writing about? It's really hard to say. the first two stanzas seem like one thing, then the rest of the poem, something ...

I liked it. Didn't understand the last line (the one apart from the stanza) Also you should capitalize Convinced and If since they are starts of new sentences. it's the ...

You might want to check out this article: Poetry & Punctuation . Another thing, its common to capitalize the first letter of the first word in each new line. The ...

I didn't put a lot of effort into reading it. Poetry is not just verses that sentences are in. Poems have to have structure. Rhythm, common stanza pattern, anything . ...

All can move through a choice. I didn't like this line. It doesn't make much sense, on its own. (which is how it is in the poem) Again, you seem ...

First, Welcome to the Site! I think you are new, yeah? This poem sort of has a good subject matter, it really doesn't get "sort of" good until the end. ...

It has some flow, then sometimes it doesn't. I'm never fond of these dark depressing poems because they tend to be all the same, though here you talk with God ...

Hee, Nice Flemzo! I...liked it but it felt sort of, too long for it to be enjoyable? Maybe thats because I always pack my poems into tight ten liners if ...

She has a case of streptococcus . LOOK! A word I've actually heard before! You know what is sad Is it took the word "Gossing" for me to realize this ...

It was...good to read, though almost too introspective. I didn't understand the last line, what is "regular"? You should read over this a few times, there are some errors and ...

Being religious, I liked the message behind it. It's a nice poem, but now I'm going to pick it a part :-D The cross is a symbol of [s]the[/s] God ...

I didn't exactly like this poem, the subject just wasn't for me, though it did remind me of Picture of Dorian Grey! This heart, beats, pulses and darkens the Painting. ...