Haha, I find it amusing that the one poem that I want to be buried at the very end of the list gets the most attention.
Anyways, thanks all for the crits, they did help a good bit. Still not too sure about the line breaks/last line...help? (I do believe I'm going to be showing this to a friend of mine, which is why I want it to be as neat and put-together as possible, even though it is a tad cliche.)
Thanks for your time!
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