Emerson

is a the coat closet Word problem? I love the third paragraph in the letter, about confiscating something. The tone seemed real Nabokovish to me, or something. Perhaps it is ...

Ahh I wrote a poem about the same subject! Perhaps, if you would like that, you could read it for a reference point for what Snoink is calling more "sneaky". ...

Why yes, I don't remember anything from one, though I did read it.... Mattias kneaded his forehead with his hands *gasp* typo! I didn't like how you used the word ...

It was awkward, and everyone looked like they wanted to do or say something, but none of them did. The cashier screamed. I love how perfect that works. The second ...

I like how you're pulling the threads together. It's going at a great timing. And your switching POVs works nicely. “You’re saying they set out tomurder?” Space! But worst of ...

I love the kids devotion to is mother and how very, very, much he wants to get something for her. Only beauty tells him what to do. I also like ...

which would mean they would to delay the whole operation Missing a word? The black clothing and the bags no doubt arouse the suspicion of the supervisor conveniently stood behind ...

This was so fun to read ^_^ Like I said on MSN: I think your characters are being gobbled up by description. Or perhaps a better word is smothered? They're ...

Wowa, let me just say your voice totally creeps me out. Makes me feel like something is going to jump out of thin are and attack me O.o I do ...

One Ahhh... I love your writing. The boy jumped, a small scream escaping his throat Forgot a period. Was your usual scary and twisted fantasy ^_^ something about it was ...

I never liked long poetry... I'm too impatient ^_^ Although Pale Fire is long, but that's Nabokov, he gets away with it. I enjoyed it, though I felt more like ...

Ah, don't we love nuclear blast radiation monsters? See that is where the funny dialog is. And so..Sarah isn't dead or the monster...thing? Although I assumed that monster thing took ...

Seems pretty good. It's going in a direction I may not follow: I'm not much for fantasy lands. "I haven't talked this much in years," Addo added on to the ...

I could hear the evil voice in the back of my mind saying "You're going to die," but I held it off for as long as I could. You need ...

for she had told him many times she loved feeling of hair flying as she fell. the feeling of. It glistened in the blinding lights of the circus, making it ...