Emerson

with the T.V. turned on to some rude, crude programming. Rude and Crude being about the same thing, and rhyming, I suggest you cut one or the other. You bog ...

One: read over your work before you post it please . Check for typos and spelling errors, so we don't have to. Two: Till isn't the word you mean to ...

I didn't like it. Of course, it wasn't a bad poem. You rhymed, you punctuated, I love it. But it just didn't seem like a good poem to me. Why? ...

In my opinion, this poem was drowning in description and left me for no room to feel anything. It came off as wordy and packed full of images, rather than ...

I liked it =D I really only have two complaints: dripping hopeless , dripping neglect Hopeless what? If you want that to be a none it should be 'hopelessness' or ...

I loved it. The crazy captain who strongly believes in only the captain going down with the ship. As always, you write with the best of skill. He sighed, clear ...

This poem really anything for me. I suppose it was three stories, all about people's demise? It just didn't work, IMO. Also, you had no punctuation at all. Poetry and ...

The beginning of this was very list-like, so it didn't work. And, then it turned into a story in verse form. I highly suggest you turn this into a story: ...

I really enjoyed this. (As always.) My favorite part was this: God is betting I’m going to fall, fall past the pines and their seven kinds of needles, past the ...

It was good, poetic, but I didn't feel anything and so... I'm not really sure what to say? I can't really grasp what you were trying to depict and show...So, ...

Ah, poems with emotions... These are always interesting to critique. Well, yes, it's short. That doesn't leave much room for....much of anything. The one thing you really, really want to ...

left all their boats and Boston boats in Boston, yes? husband and life? husband and wife, I assume. --- I read all this earlier, but I can't remember what I ...

This made me think of a morbid song you jump rope to in elementary school xD but then I got upset when the rhyming didn't follow, or the rhythm was ...

....WTF...? That was just the freakiest thing I ever read. did...Ariel just get up after her head being twisted 180 degrees? Yeah. Creepy, Brad, creepy. Freaked me out . ummm ...

omfgjonneedshim..... So, we know what the black goo is. Cool. Is the thing after them? Probably. Yuuuum. I'm dying because each chapter I read I think, "No, it's ending soon, ...