ElvenJedi

Sure! and I'm glad it was helpful =)

Thanks so much for this EXTREMELY helpful review!! Really appreciate it :)

Thanks for reviewing :) This was very encouraging, and thanks for pointing out the mistake, I'll fix it right away!

Thanks so much for the encouraging review! and don't worry about it :P

*Dry

P.S. Sry bones is just a Bible reference :)

I would write a review on this, but in my opinion, there's not much to criticize. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I love the fantasy feel to it. The simple ...

Thanks for this very helpful review, and I appreciate the encouragement!

Thanks for this very helpful review, really appreciate the feedback!

Thanks for this EXTREMELY helpful review! I'll be sure to edit this soon, considering all your suggestions!

Thanks for the encouragement and helpful review! Yes I do struggle with forced rhyming, so your feedback on that is very helpful, thanks for taking the time to review this!

Thanks for the helpful review!

Thanks for another helpful review, exactly what I needed to hear!

Thanks again for another helpful review! And don't apologize for tearing it apart--if I didn't want hardcore advice I wouldn't post it on YWS xD

Thanks for this awesome review! Very, VERY helpful =D