ElvenJedi

Thanks so much for the review, it was super helpful! The odd rhyming was intentional, to emphasize the first two lines about fear in each stanza- and to answer your ...

Thanks for the suggestion! I've never thought of that before, I might try that in the future :D

Thank you!!

No problem! :)

this is incredible favorite lines are the last two, as well as the third one, "desperately she called for authenticity." I love the level of truth in your writing, it's ...

thank you so much seriously~ and you too

aghh well i got misty eyes reading THIS, so i guess we're even :p thank you so much for saying this, i kinda really needed it (especially after the concert, ...

Oh my wow you are an amazing writer I don't understand how this was even possibly achievable I LOVE THIS AHHHH

I relate very weirdly to the mc here... wonderful piece by the way like seriously this was AMAZING!!!

You're welcome! and yes I got this response, if that's whatcha mean.

wow this is epic! nice plot too, and the rhyme got really well. nice job!

I don't normally reply to reviews but this was EXTREMELY HELPFUL! You are amazing at reviewing, I can tell you must've really taken the time to write a good review. ...

Wow. this is amazing. wow. all I can say is wow. this is beautiful :O keep writing!

Okay... just wanna say this is a really emotional poem. Very heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it.

I'm sorry for asking... but is this a true story?