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Re: Love.
Wow. Being someone who has participated in some of these activities, I feel you did an amazing job setting the mood and the scene from the beginning to the end. ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: Doubled Horror- Part 1
I really enjoyed your work! You did a very good job at setting up the mood throughout the whole story, and it wasn't inconsistent. It had a good hook in ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: Deepavali-The Festival of Lights
I enjoyed reading your work! I think it flowed well, for the most part, and I think certain words you used really described the scenes well. However, there are a ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: Child's Play
Before I begin reviewing this, I just want you to know that I absolutely worship this poem. It made me feel sad and happy and everything all at once, and ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: Your Sweatshirt
This made me smile. I felt happiness as I read this, because its romantic, and it does a good job of being just that. There are a few grammatical errors, ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: The Forest.
I write a lot of nature themed poems, and this one reminded me a lot of the ones I write, or the ones anyone may write to be fair. I ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: Take Me To Peace
In this poem, I was actually very captivated by this female figure throughout. It adds such a layer of depth to me. This female character makes me think even more ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: A Day In The Memories Of Summer
Already from the first words I was drawn into this poem. I think it is beautifully written, and it gave such great details and descriptions of everything happening and all ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: A Wascally Wabbit
I find this sort of story very appealing to begin with, and I love the way you worked with it. You gave both the characters an impressive amount of personality, ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: Patriot
I honestly adore this work. I love it. Me being a loyal person in general can relate to how this person is feeling (Even though it may be to a ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: I stopped living
I actually quite enjoyed reading this piece. However, there were a few things that caught my attention. You switched between tenses in the beginning, and I'm not quite sure if ...
Aug 24, 2014
