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ElizabethHuntsJoy

ElizabethHuntsJoy

  • Other » General, General Re: Love.

    Wow. Being someone who has participated in some of these activities, I feel you did an amazing job setting the mood and the scene from the beginning to the end. ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doubled Horror- Part 1

    I really enjoyed your work! You did a very good job at setting up the mood throughout the whole story, and it wasn't inconsistent. It had a good hook in ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Deepavali-The Festival of Lights

    I enjoyed reading your work! I think it flowed well, for the most part, and I think certain words you used really described the scenes well. However, there are a ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Child's Play

    Before I begin reviewing this, I just want you to know that I absolutely worship this poem. It made me feel sad and happy and everything all at once, and ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Your Sweatshirt

    This made me smile. I felt happiness as I read this, because its romantic, and it does a good job of being just that. There are a few grammatical errors, ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Forest.

    I write a lot of nature themed poems, and this one reminded me a lot of the ones I write, or the ones anyone may write to be fair. I ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    In this poem, I was actually very captivated by this female figure throughout. It adds such a layer of depth to me. This female character makes me think even more ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Day In The Memories Of Summer

    Already from the first words I was drawn into this poem. I think it is beautifully written, and it gave such great details and descriptions of everything happening and all ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: A Wascally Wabbit

    I find this sort of story very appealing to begin with, and I love the way you worked with it. You gave both the characters an impressive amount of personality, ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Patriot

    I honestly adore this work. I love it. Me being a loyal person in general can relate to how this person is feeling (Even though it may be to a ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I stopped living

    I actually quite enjoyed reading this piece. However, there were a few things that caught my attention. You switched between tenses in the beginning, and I'm not quite sure if ...

    Aug 24, 2014


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