ElizabethFiction

Feeling better today since it is my birthday, but it's my party and I'love cry if I want to. Anyway, I love how you established somewhat of a time period ...

I was very surprised to find out that this was a fantasy story. Granted, I should have taken a look at the genre but that's besides the point. I don't ...

I loved this poem. So intense yet delicate in its own integrity. Quick suggestion. Please capitalize at the start of a new stanza. That was the only teeny tiny nitpicky ...

When you love someone so much that you're terrified of losing them, so you never truly give your entire self to them no matter how much they prove their love ...

Very powerful poem about having appreciation for the people you love, especially a significant other. Some people do not recognize the margin of pain that they set the moment they ...

This was EPIC! Not only did this poem lift my spirits and make me want to watch Mulan, but now I feel inspired enough to write at least 100 pages ...

Nice poem! In my opinion this could easily be made into a short story or even a novel. I like the concept of using a child's point of view to ...

This speaks to me so well that I'm reconsidering my thought process when it comes to writing. Just like any great writer, we all have those moments where we spend ...

What else can I say besides the fact that this is beautiful. I'm not someone who reads a lot of fantasy works, but I do love the enigmatic realm of ...

This is a very deep poem about brushing your teeth while sharing the sink with someone else, which grosses me out like nothing else in the world! I loved it, ...

Wow this is great! How old is your sister, because she has got some talent! The message is very clear. Whatever you are IS what you are, so why attempt ...

I love reading scripts. Unlike regular forms of writing, scripts immediately set up the location, time period, time of year, etc., and makes it much easier for me to create ...

I love love love humor. It's just something that I can't get enough of. I consider myself to be a very serious person but as soon as I see something ...

There are no words to express the yearning for love and pain that I feel from this poem. Although I have a pretty okay relationship with my father, I still ...

Beautiful poem. I loved the way you showed that the mother does everything to protect her child even if that means that she'll loose her life in the process. I ...