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Re: Like a Light
Hey fleuralplants! My name is Elinor. I saw this sitting in the Green Room since yesterday and thought I would drop in to give you a quick review. This was ...
Nov 10, 2020 -
Re: Application Essay
Hey Em16! My name is Elinor, and I thought that I would drop by to give your essay a quick review. I hope the rest of your application is going ...
Oct 22, 2020 -
Re: Snake Bite
Hi GeneralSplarge! I wonder if you meant to set this in 1915. I think that going that route would be really interesting, because there's nothing that precludes this from being ...
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: When The Rose Dies (Prologue)
Hi there, arikf13101! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you're enjoying your time here so far. My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give your ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Hi Buranko! Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been enjoying your time here so far. My name is Elinor, and I thought that I would drop by to give your ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: 3 Things I realized while growing up
Hi LenneTea! Welcome to YWS. My name is Elinor, and I'm so happy that you decided to share your story with us. I thought I would drop by to give ...
Sep 9, 2020 -
Re: A Pack of Wolves Serenades a Cloudy Sky
Hey RavenLord! Happy RevMo! Thank you for sharing your poem on YWS. I'm Elinor, and thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed the imagery ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: A
Hey dux! May name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed reading this story, and your use of second person. ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Walking Fast
Hi Liminality! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give your poem a quick review. I like the background that you picked for it. Is ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Frieda Aflister - Chapter Three
Hey whatcamacallit! Elinor here to read your chapter 3! I like how this story is progressing overall, and I'm curious to see where it goes now that Frieda is out ...
May 2, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 10 - Stars
Hi BlackThorne! My name is Elinor, and I'm representing the great Slytherin house to give your story a review. Just as a heads up, I haven't read your previous chapters, ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 19.2)
Hi again mel! Elinor back representing Slytherin house to review the next chapter in your novel. I skimmed your other chapters so that I could get caught up with what ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 10.1
Hi ExOmelas! Elinor back from Slytherin house to help knock this chapter out of the Green Room. Even though I missed like the first eight chapters of this, I found ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 19.3
Hi sound, Elinor here from Slytherin house to review your chapter. I originally wasn't going to write any more reviews, but I saw this poking around in the Green Room ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Sognore 6.0
Hi Anamel! My name is Elinor, and I'm here from Slytherin house to help get this chapter in your novel out of the Green Room. In the interest of full ...
Apr 26, 2020