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Re: Undefeated Legend
Hey FlamingHomosexual! Welcome to YWS. :) I thought I would drop by to review your poem. Personally I love Freddie Mercury, and noticed your icon when I saw that you ...
Nov 10, 2020 -
Re: Like a Light
Hey fleuralplants! My name is Elinor. I saw this sitting in the Green Room since yesterday and thought I would drop in to give you a quick review. This was ...
Nov 10, 2020 -
Re: Application Essay
Hey Em16! My name is Elinor, and I thought that I would drop by to give your essay a quick review. I hope the rest of your application is going ...
Oct 22, 2020 -
Re: Snake Bite
Hi GeneralSplarge! I wonder if you meant to set this in 1915. I think that going that route would be really interesting, because there's nothing that precludes this from being ...
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: When The Rose Dies (Prologue)
Hi there, arikf13101! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you're enjoying your time here so far. My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give your ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Hi Buranko! Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been enjoying your time here so far. My name is Elinor, and I thought that I would drop by to give your ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: 3 Things I realized while growing up
Hi LenneTea! Welcome to YWS. My name is Elinor, and I'm so happy that you decided to share your story with us. I thought I would drop by to give ...
Sep 9, 2020 -
Re: A Pack of Wolves Serenades a Cloudy Sky
Hey RavenLord! Happy RevMo! Thank you for sharing your poem on YWS. I'm Elinor, and thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed the imagery ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: A
Hey dux! May name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed reading this story, and your use of second person. ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Walking Fast
Hi Liminality! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give your poem a quick review. I like the background that you picked for it. Is ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Frieda Aflister - Chapter Three
Hey whatcamacallit! Elinor here to read your chapter 3! I like how this story is progressing overall, and I'm curious to see where it goes now that Frieda is out ...
May 2, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 10 - Stars
Hi BlackThorne! My name is Elinor, and I'm representing the great Slytherin house to give your story a review. Just as a heads up, I haven't read your previous chapters, ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 19.2)
Hi again mel! Elinor back representing Slytherin house to review the next chapter in your novel. I skimmed your other chapters so that I could get caught up with what ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 10.1
Hi ExOmelas! Elinor back from Slytherin house to help knock this chapter out of the Green Room. Even though I missed like the first eight chapters of this, I found ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 19.3
Hi sound, Elinor here from Slytherin house to review your chapter. I originally wasn't going to write any more reviews, but I saw this poking around in the Green Room ...
Apr 26, 2020