Elinor

So, hello there! You have a very concept here, but I think that there is a lot that you can do with it; I listened to the song and can ...

Hm. So, I have to say that this was a good poem, but parts of it were somewhat hard to follow. You have an interesting subject matter and some of ...

Hi Pen, Here I am to review. Poetry isn't my strong suit and it's been a while since I've reviewed, so bear with me. But, all in all, I thought ...

Hey there! Ultraviolet already gave you a really good review, so I'm going to try to not be too repetitive of what she told you. As a whole, this is ...

Hello! So, I haven't read the previous two parts so I won't be able to comment on the story as a whole and the continuity/characters -- but still I am ...

Hiya, This was a very hard piece for me to really latch onto, or enjoy or appreciate as a whole. I can tell that you have some good stuff here ...

Hi, Justa! I enjoyed this poem. The theme is a bit overdone, but it's a common experience that a lot of people undergo in some way at some point or ...

Hiya, I just want to say that this was quite an interesting poem that I rather liked a lot. I liked how it wasn't overly detailed or stuffed to the ...

Hi there! I don't know if you did any research before you wrote this short story or if it even was your intent to write a realistic portrayal of how ...

Hey! So, this was a very cool little story, and I'm very glad that I came across it and was able to read it. I can definitely say that I've ...

Hello there! So, I really want to like this short story, but something about it just falls short. You have an intriguing premise that should promise a lot of conflict ...

Hi, It's been a while since I've critiqued, so I'm sorry if this is a little bit rusty! This short story was adorable. Despite the fairly basic plot, it put ...

Hey, Jas! So, this was a really neat piece, and I think that if you figured a few things out in terms of the story and the characters, it would ...

Hey Lily. :) So, I really liked this poem a lot. It was really meaningful and sweet, and it was easy to relate to. There isn't a whole lot wrong ...

Hi! So, you have interesting threads here, and it will be neat to see where you take this story and these characters that you've introduced. I suppose my main note ...