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Hi there! So, I'm not sure what this is supposed to be, or what kind of story you're trying to tell. If your aim is to make me guess what ...

Hi! So, this was a really interesting take on the classic Sleeping Beauty tale, even if it took me a minute to understand the twist. I just have a few ...

Two things before I begin the review proper. A/N: All of the people and illnesses mentioned in the work and the works following this one are fictional. If there are ...

Hi there! I was very much intrigued by your story. It's definitely hard to tell an engaging tale through mostly dialogue! You put a lot of rich detail into such ...

Hi there! I quite liked this. You have a lot of great imagery in this poem and flowed very nicely. I've dabbled in poetry before, but while I can read ...

Hi there! Okay, so you have a lot going on in this story; a relationship, the death of person the main character is closest to, the way they're treated by ...

Hi Katherine! I see you're new here; welcome to YWS! I really hope you're enjoying it and you decide to stick around. Anyway, this is such a cute poem. Christmas ...

Hi, Nike! So, I'm going to have to agree with Rosey. This piece didn't do anything for me. I definitely think that you could flesh this out into either a ...

Hi there! I saw this and I thought that I'd give you a review. It's my first in ages, so bear with me! To be frank, I didn't like this. ...

Hm, that's hard. There are a lot of movies I really love, but at this point, for me, I'll have to say it's Captain America: The First Avenger . Sure, ...

Hi there! So this is really good. :) The idea for this came for a dream, you say? That's so cool! I get a lot of good ideas for my ...

Hi! So, I salute you for writing about Columbine. It's not easy. I just had a couple of things that I wanted to say in regards to this piece. Blink ...

Hi, Snowberry! This is a really good poem. It's not too complex, but yet it still manages to convey a lot of emotion and depth. I definitely felt sad and ...

Hi Lumi! So, I want to say that I adore your poetry. I am more of a writer of short stories, and I will admit that I'm envious about how ...

Hi Pen! So, I thought that you did a very good job with this poem. It has a lot of strong emotion ringing throughout it, and I can tell that ...