Elinor

Hi! So, this was a really interesting take on the classic Sleeping Beauty tale, even if it took me a minute to understand the twist. I just have a few ...

Two things before I begin the review proper. A/N: All of the people and illnesses mentioned in the work and the works following this one are fictional. If there are ...

Hi there! I was very much intrigued by your story. It's definitely hard to tell an engaging tale through mostly dialogue! You put a lot of rich detail into such ...

Hi there! I quite liked this. You have a lot of great imagery in this poem and flowed very nicely. I've dabbled in poetry before, but while I can read ...

Hi there! Okay, so you have a lot going on in this story; a relationship, the death of person the main character is closest to, the way they're treated by ...

Hi Katherine! I see you're new here; welcome to YWS! I really hope you're enjoying it and you decide to stick around. Anyway, this is such a cute poem. Christmas ...

Hi, Nike! So, I'm going to have to agree with Rosey. This piece didn't do anything for me. I definitely think that you could flesh this out into either a ...

Hi there! I saw this and I thought that I'd give you a review. It's my first in ages, so bear with me! To be frank, I didn't like this. ...

Hm, that's hard. There are a lot of movies I really love, but at this point, for me, I'll have to say it's Captain America: The First Avenger . Sure, ...

Hi there! So this is really good. :) The idea for this came for a dream, you say? That's so cool! I get a lot of good ideas for my ...

Hi! So, I salute you for writing about Columbine. It's not easy. I just had a couple of things that I wanted to say in regards to this piece. Blink ...

Hi, Snowberry! This is a really good poem. It's not too complex, but yet it still manages to convey a lot of emotion and depth. I definitely felt sad and ...

Hi Lumi! So, I want to say that I adore your poetry. I am more of a writer of short stories, and I will admit that I'm envious about how ...

Hi Pen! So, I thought that you did a very good job with this poem. It has a lot of strong emotion ringing throughout it, and I can tell that ...

So, hello there! You have a very concept here, but I think that there is a lot that you can do with it; I listened to the song and can ...