Elinor

Hello, this is an interesting poem! What is exactly this poem supposed to be? That wasn't entirely clear to me. I enjoyed the multiple Disney references, but I didn't understand ...

Um, this is interesting! I don't know a lot about Michael Jackson, but this is a cute little piece and I'm not sure that you intended it to be much ...

Hey again, Rosey! Well, this second part was definitely an enjoyable read, and I don't have a lot to say that I didn't already say in my first critique. Your ...

Hello Rosey, You've always given me such good feedback on my writing but I realized that I don't think I've ever read anything of yours. I've heard you talk about ...

Hello! This is a really interesting piece. I'm not really sure what focus you're trying to take or how you would describe the composition of this (I guess that's why ...

Hello! This was a very interesting read, and it taught me a lot that I didn't know about the platypus. And while you present your facts well, that's only part ...

Hi there! So, I don't usually review lyrics (it can be difficult when there's no melody to go along with it!) But I will do my best to help you ...

Hi, Well this is definitely an interesting premise, and you have a unique and snappy style that kept me reading until the end. In a short space of time you ...

Hi there, This is beautiful. I love the richness of your language, and while it's simple it still conveys a powerful message that in my own personal opinion is an ...

Hi lostthought! So, I thought that was an interesting piece. It's certainly and original, creative idea, and you had my attention throughout. I also wanted to commend you on making ...

Hello, I think you do some interesting things with this as an introduction, and I'm curious to see what else you have in store further along the line. If this ...

Hey there! I'm Elinor, here to review this short story for you! Overall, I thought you did really good job with this. It's well written and I think you do ...

Hey ldbonita! I thought you did a really good job with this piece. I really feel the emotions of these two people and what they're going through. I think part ...

Audy! I don't think I've ever reviewed of your pieces before. If I have, my memory is terrible. But this was really quite lovely. There's such rich imagery in this, ...

Hey RavenLords! Welcome to YWS! I thought this was a very interesting piece. It works well as a quick read if we want to know basic facts about Frank Carney, ...