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Elinor

  • Article / Essay » Science, Satire Re: Breaking News: Super Hose “Extinguishes” Pesky Sun

    Hi there, Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been having a good time so far - I see you've already done a couple of reviews! :) . Thanks for sharing ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Mind Changers City Rebellion

    Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. :) So, this is very short. And even though it's very short I'm intrigued by the ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Ella

    Hi! Welcome to YWS! :) Should this be in short stories rather than novels? I'm not sure. I'm interested to know if you have more of this. Even though this ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: American Citizen.

    Hi, I like this quite a bit. I'm not Christian myself, but as an American who often wonders about society and the world I definitely found this accessible. The most ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: 25 Things to Keep in Mind When Surviving a Horror Novel

    Hey there! So I haven't actually read a lot of horror novels, but I've seen plenty of movies and I found a lot of the points that you made to ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Script » Dramatic, Romantic Re: An Effed Up Love Life

    Hello, At first, I was interested in this. Interested because as I'm writing this review I just got my back from my first college class of the year (I'm a ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: imperfection

    Flite! I like this a lot. It's short, sweet, simple and does a good job of evoking the spectrum of emotions that come with being in love. While this doesn't ...

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Destiny In a Cup of Tea

    Hey there, I quite liked this. You do a great job of telling a compelling story within the limits of the poem's structure, and I found myself thoroughly entertained throughout ...

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chiravian Knights - Prologue

    Hello there! You've done a great job with this so far. It does what a good introduction to any story is supposed to do - it draws me in while ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Realistic Re: Overcoming Naivety

    Wow, This is a beautiful and incredibly brave piece, and I really applaud you for having the courage to share this. Since I personally have never had to go anything ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Little Hope She Carried!

    Hello, Happy review day! This is such a cute and heartwarming short story and I really enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure what your goals for this piece are, whether ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Under Your Thumb Is Where It's At

    Hey there buck! Happy review day! I think that was a really interesting poem, and an entertaining and unpredictable read! Like the previous reviewer, I think the additional editing - ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Spades - 1

    Hey Ark! Happy review day! I tried but failed to think of an air-related pun to open with this, so I'll go straight into the review. This was a really ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Sixteen Seasons Ago

    Hi there! Are these characters...mice? Some other kind of animal? That wasn't entirely clear to me when I was reading this piece, but if they are, props for doing something ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Argosy

    Hey there! So, I quite like this. There's some really nice imagery here, and what is evoked paints a clear picture, which is what any poem should do. I think ...

    May 31, 2015


something I have been thinking about ever since I saw the Super Mario Bros movie is how once I took a "what Nintendo character are you" quiz and I got Waluigi.
— Elinor