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Re: Breaking News: Super Hose “Extinguishes” Pesky Sun
Hi there, Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been having a good time so far - I see you've already done a couple of reviews! :) . Thanks for sharing ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Mind Changers City Rebellion
Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. :) So, this is very short. And even though it's very short I'm intrigued by the ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Ella
Hi! Welcome to YWS! :) Should this be in short stories rather than novels? I'm not sure. I'm interested to know if you have more of this. Even though this ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
Hi, I like this quite a bit. I'm not Christian myself, but as an American who often wonders about society and the world I definitely found this accessible. The most ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: 25 Things to Keep in Mind When Surviving a Horror Novel
Hey there! So I haven't actually read a lot of horror novels, but I've seen plenty of movies and I found a lot of the points that you made to ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: An Effed Up Love Life
Hello, At first, I was interested in this. Interested because as I'm writing this review I just got my back from my first college class of the year (I'm a ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: imperfection
Flite! I like this a lot. It's short, sweet, simple and does a good job of evoking the spectrum of emotions that come with being in love. While this doesn't ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: Destiny In a Cup of Tea
Hey there, I quite liked this. You do a great job of telling a compelling story within the limits of the poem's structure, and I found myself thoroughly entertained throughout ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: Chiravian Knights - Prologue
Hello there! You've done a great job with this so far. It does what a good introduction to any story is supposed to do - it draws me in while ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Overcoming Naivety
Wow, This is a beautiful and incredibly brave piece, and I really applaud you for having the courage to share this. Since I personally have never had to go anything ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: The Little Hope She Carried!
Hello, Happy review day! This is such a cute and heartwarming short story and I really enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure what your goals for this piece are, whether ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Under Your Thumb Is Where It's At
Hey there buck! Happy review day! I think that was a really interesting poem, and an entertaining and unpredictable read! Like the previous reviewer, I think the additional editing - ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Spades - 1
Hey Ark! Happy review day! I tried but failed to think of an air-related pun to open with this, so I'll go straight into the review. This was a really ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Sixteen Seasons Ago
Hi there! Are these characters...mice? Some other kind of animal? That wasn't entirely clear to me when I was reading this piece, but if they are, props for doing something ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: The Argosy
Hey there! So, I quite like this. There's some really nice imagery here, and what is evoked paints a clear picture, which is what any poem should do. I think ...
May 31, 2015
