Elinor

Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. :) So, this is very short. And even though it's very short I'm intrigued by the ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! :) Should this be in short stories rather than novels? I'm not sure. I'm interested to know if you have more of this. Even though this ...

Hi, I like this quite a bit. I'm not Christian myself, but as an American who often wonders about society and the world I definitely found this accessible. The most ...

Hey there! So I haven't actually read a lot of horror novels, but I've seen plenty of movies and I found a lot of the points that you made to ...

Hello, At first, I was interested in this. Interested because as I'm writing this review I just got my back from my first college class of the year (I'm a ...

Flite! I like this a lot. It's short, sweet, simple and does a good job of evoking the spectrum of emotions that come with being in love. While this doesn't ...

Hey there, I quite liked this. You do a great job of telling a compelling story within the limits of the poem's structure, and I found myself thoroughly entertained throughout ...

Hello there! You've done a great job with this so far. It does what a good introduction to any story is supposed to do - it draws me in while ...

Wow, This is a beautiful and incredibly brave piece, and I really applaud you for having the courage to share this. Since I personally have never had to go anything ...

Hello, Happy review day! This is such a cute and heartwarming short story and I really enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure what your goals for this piece are, whether ...

Hey there buck! Happy review day! I think that was a really interesting poem, and an entertaining and unpredictable read! Like the previous reviewer, I think the additional editing - ...

Hey Ark! Happy review day! I tried but failed to think of an air-related pun to open with this, so I'll go straight into the review. This was a really ...

Hi there! Are these characters...mice? Some other kind of animal? That wasn't entirely clear to me when I was reading this piece, but if they are, props for doing something ...

Hey there! So, I quite like this. There's some really nice imagery here, and what is evoked paints a clear picture, which is what any poem should do. I think ...

Hey! So, I think that this is a really interesting concept for a novel and I think that you're going to have a lot of fun writing it come November. ...