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Re: British Love, Boston Affection (Rated R)
Hey Fishr! My name is Elinor, and I thought I'd drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed reading this piece, and more that I thought I would. ...
Sep 26, 2019 -
Re: Hometown (Revised)
Blue! :D Somehow I haven't read any of your work before, but now that's about change. I love this poem. It does a fantastic job of evoking this sense of ...
Sep 23, 2019 -
Re: A Lot Like Christmas: Chapter Two
Hey Sasha! I enjoyed the first chapter of this piece, and because I saw the third chapter of this kicking around the Green Room, I thought I'd circle back and ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: 2184
Hey there qbidmead! My name is Elinor, and I thought I'd give you a quick review on this piece. I don't have much to add to what Panikos already said. ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Reisen til Lavâmina. (NORWEGIAN)
Hey Doela! So, I cannot speak for everyone on the site, but I don't speak Norwegian and I'm not sure if many people do either. While YWSers come from all ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Broken Records
Hey Kacey! My name is Elinor, and I thought that I would drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed reading this poem, and I thought it was really ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Not the Time-Poem (First Draft. Will post final in a separate post!)
Hi ToxicAnglerFish! My name is Elinor, and I hope you're doing well! I thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. Overall, I'm less knowledgable with poetry ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Autumn Always [Dystopian]
Hey Swarx! My name is Elinor, and I'm dropping by here to give you a quick review. For future reference, it might be easier for people to read and comment ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: A Lot Like Christmas: Chapter One
Hey Sasha! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. I love the concept of this and think it can make ...
Sep 20, 2019 -
Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 1.1
Hey Biscuits! I've seen a few of these chapters kicking around in the green room and figured I'd start at the very beginning. I don't think I've read any of ...
Sep 20, 2019 -
Re: Snapshot
Hey LordStar! Elinor here to give you a quick review. I don't think I've looked at any of your poetry yet, but I always enjoy reading your work. I think ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: Nosebleeds In Spring
Hey raj! My name is Elinor, and I hope you're having a great day. I'm here to give you a quick review. I have not read the first chapter of ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: The Fall
Hey Europa! My name is Elinor, and I'm here to give you a quick review. I quite enjoyed this story. It's an effective humorous look at the Adam and Eve ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: When I Was Anna - 20
Hey hey hey! So, the denouement begins. This is probably one of the strongest chapters you've done so far, if only because some version of this is where I always ...
Sep 17, 2019 -
Re: When I Was Anna - 19
Oi vey. This chapter was very difficult to read, and I mean that in a good way, especially with Summer's long novel that she sends to Micah at the end. ...
Sep 17, 2019
