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Re: Lament
Hey Hayley! My name is Elinor, and I thought I'd drop by to give you a quick review and welcome you to YWS. I hope you're enjoying your time here ...
Mar 14, 2020 -
Re: More than Full Circle
Hey ZaffranGrey! My name is Elinor. and I thought I would drop by to welcome you to YWS and to give you a quick review. I enjoyed this piece, and ...
Mar 12, 2020 -
Re: The Tragedy of My Legs
Hey SirenCymbeline! I'm Elinor, and I wanted to drop by and help you get this poem out of the green room! It was an enjoyable read, and I definitely know ...
Mar 11, 2020 -
Re: A Special Letter...
Hey BhavyaMehta123! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your time here thus far. My name is Elinor, and I'm dropping by to give you a quick review on your ...
Mar 10, 2020 -
Re: Oriphiel [5-9]
Hi again Claria! I didn't even realize that you wrote a second part to this, but since I saw it (and there's still a little bit of time left in ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 5.2
Hey Pan! Thought I would help get this out of the Green Room in the last bit that we have left of review day here (and you also get the ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 5.1
Hi Pan! Here to review the next part of your piece. This will be a short review, as I don't have much to critique here. Not too much happens, and ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 4.2
Hey Pan! Happy review day. I'm going to keep getting caught up on this to the extent that I can. Like the past chapters, this is well written and does ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 4.1
Hi Pan! Happy review day! My apologies for falling so behind on this. I know you said that you were putting this story aside for a while, but nonetheless I ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: The Midwinter King, A Fairy Story-Part 2
Hi again Terian805! I'm Elinor, back to review part 2 of your story. I wonder if there will be more to it, since you ended on a cliffhanger. Like with ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: The Midwinter King, A Fairy Story-Part 1
Hi there, terian805! Happy review day! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. As I saw the first part of ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: sad alternate ending of the book: mice and men
Hi Alana! My name is Elinor, and I thought that I would drop by to give you a quick review. I know it's been sitting in the Green Room for ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Oriphiel [1-4]
Hi Claria, Happy review day! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by and give you a quick review. :) I really enjoyed reading this poem, and ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Movie Review Essay on "McFarland, USA" (w/ bibliography)
Hey LZPianoGirl! Happy review day! I thought that I would drop by and give you a quick review. I've never seen McFarland USA, but even so I should still be ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Characters for a Potential Story
Hey WinnyWriter! My name is Elinor, and happy review day! I see you've been with us since September, and I hope you've been enjoying your time on the site thus ...
Jan 26, 2020