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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Crime of War

    Hello,raindrop here for a review! It helps,I hope. I will read and review at once because it is pretty long. Here with the lonely writing but before that.. 1.First of ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sourd-Muet

    This short story is amazing! Atleast in my opinion it shows a lot. I think most of us can relate because as writers not only readers and reviewers we had ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: His Last Words

    This is a really really heart breaking and I,personally,can not relate to you because it had not happened to me but I understand the sadness but still good thoughts in ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: Corrupted | Prologue

    Raindrop here for your review! I just woke up so excuse me. 1.The tittle was good.Specially I like simple tittles so you had my attention.I rarely admit that but it ...

    Apr 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: j - 1

    For the start,I was really excited and it turned to be even greater than I thought it will be! First if all,you had caught my attention with the short and ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Winter Poems

    Fresh,interesting and new!This is all I can say about this. Overall it is very good.The way it is writen.The feeling and thoughts put in it. The work by itself is ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Victory

    From the very beginning I liked it.I love warrior and all the war is very well written and made into the text.The story is going on smoothly.I love both of ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Schizo

    It was amazing!It is amazing! I think you make it speak out for itself very well and this is pretty good.I am impressed. It shows the sadness and somehow you ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: The Thieves' Creed (MkI)

    I do know if i should count the punctuation and the missing of the fullstops as something wrong? Anyways,just going through this work. Oh gold, sweet sweet gold/./ Wait, actually/,/ ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken !

    Only some things I thought of correcting if it is right: I tried my level /good to the best/ To keep everything right and the bond alive I tried my ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Here

    At the beginning I was not that interesting but a bit by bit I understand it and started to feel the thoughts put in it. I do not think you ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Abused

    Love it!I could feel the sadness and feelings from the very beginning and drag me to continue reading this till the very end.The tittle is cathy shows what the main ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: Donuts? I love donuts!

    Some other mistake with the grammar or the punctuation..maybe this was the only negative thing I can say because I only found it on some places. I like the way ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roses

    Not going to judge you even If this is what a reviewer needs to do most of the time too. I think your tittle is totally fine and you should ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Politics Re: Ms. Dix

    The plot is interesting! You use the vocabulary and put the right words on the right places well! I think you have the could be felt you have your own ...

    Apr 11, 2016


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