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Re: Crime of War
Hello,raindrop here for a review! It helps,I hope. I will read and review at once because it is pretty long. Here with the lonely writing but before that.. 1.First of ...
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Re: Sourd-Muet
This short story is amazing! Atleast in my opinion it shows a lot. I think most of us can relate because as writers not only readers and reviewers we had ...
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Re: His Last Words
This is a really really heart breaking and I,personally,can not relate to you because it had not happened to me but I understand the sadness but still good thoughts in ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Corrupted | Prologue
Raindrop here for your review! I just woke up so excuse me. 1.The tittle was good.Specially I like simple tittles so you had my attention.I rarely admit that but it ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: j - 1
For the start,I was really excited and it turned to be even greater than I thought it will be! First if all,you had caught my attention with the short and ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Winter Poems
Fresh,interesting and new!This is all I can say about this. Overall it is very good.The way it is writen.The feeling and thoughts put in it. The work by itself is ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Victory
From the very beginning I liked it.I love warrior and all the war is very well written and made into the text.The story is going on smoothly.I love both of ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Schizo
It was amazing!It is amazing! I think you make it speak out for itself very well and this is pretty good.I am impressed. It shows the sadness and somehow you ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: The Thieves' Creed (MkI)
I do know if i should count the punctuation and the missing of the fullstops as something wrong? Anyways,just going through this work. Oh gold, sweet sweet gold/./ Wait, actually/,/ ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Broken !
Only some things I thought of correcting if it is right: I tried my level /good to the best/ To keep everything right and the bond alive I tried my ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Here
At the beginning I was not that interesting but a bit by bit I understand it and started to feel the thoughts put in it. I do not think you ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Abused
Love it!I could feel the sadness and feelings from the very beginning and drag me to continue reading this till the very end.The tittle is cathy shows what the main ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Donuts? I love donuts!
Some other mistake with the grammar or the punctuation..maybe this was the only negative thing I can say because I only found it on some places. I like the way ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Roses
Not going to judge you even If this is what a reviewer needs to do most of the time too. I think your tittle is totally fine and you should ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Ms. Dix
The plot is interesting! You use the vocabulary and put the right words on the right places well! I think you have the could be felt you have your own ...
Apr 11, 2016
