Elijah

King Here Hello there! I honestly can not say that I really liked this work but maybe because of the way it had been written. It was just making me ...

King Here Kind of confused because the end of part ten was ending in a totally different way than the start of this part. Well, I think I start to ...

King Here Hello there! Saw this kinda lonely wonderful work and decided to check it! In line 3 I am not sure if you mean one parent or two. This ...

I like the end of this lyrics for this song so much! I kind of think I messed up singing everything but the end because the way you had end ...

King Here Hello there. I see that you are kinda the cat family fan or something. You have one or two stories related with cats like lions and tigers. I ...

It was kind of confusing how they are both over the bed and in your lungs but I think I can figure it out? It made me feel like we ...

I kind of feel sad about the topic of this poem and why I only check sad depressing poems/stories so much recently. I think the emotions are put very well ...

Hello there. I do not know if this is a mistake or just a style that you are using in which you put comma after each line. In some cases ...

King Here Well, this was kind of emotional. I felt that the sadness is the overfilling factor in this poem. I really liked it even if recently somehow, I read ...

King Here Hello there! Thought of checking out something or two from the green room and this is how I got here. I think it was totally worth it. The ...

King Here So many likes and no one reviewed? Anyways, I think of doing it even if I am first. I hope I can help you with this part also. ...

King Here So I am checking this work as you requested. Thank you a lots for requesting it to say first of all. I did not expect to be asked ...

King Here Hello there. First of all, Kaneki feels totally caught around you. For the work of yours I can honestly say that I have no idea who that Roulin ...

King Here I love the winter theme so I could not pass that and leave it aside. For me the rhyme was teared apart and unfinished. At the very beginning ...

King Here Hello there. I really liked the way you describe the fire not only as one element in the nature but something connected with a past event full of ...