Elelel

Hello! I'm here to review! Hopefully I'll catch up with part two a bit later ... no promises, but I'll do my best. Prologue: A few things to keep in ...

I'm slowly catching up! *** Ok, so. You keep apologising for your story being slow moving. I did mention this in my part 5 review, but I might just ellaborate ...

Hello! I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get back to this. I was up to here I think ... I'll go through and get all the parts I ...

Whew! Ok, got here. Let's begin ... PLOT/STRUCTURE: His frail hands were light against the doorknob, white beard long and curled although his head was completely bald. Papa said he ...

Hello! I will be reviewing your work. You can call me El or Lucy (I don't mind which). Considering this is isn't the beginning of a story it held up ...

*giggles* Gay elves? But we have not been introduced. Hello! I'm El. Or Lucy, if you prefer. And I am here to review your work! *flourishes red pen* Anyway, back ...

Oh and a note for all those I haven't told- this is NOT a vampire story Yay! I have to say, this piece actually seems a bit more polished than ...

Haha ... I just wrote a review and then my computer went spaz. Very annoying. But anyway! If you're reading this before the review I did on the second part ...

Hello! I'm El! I will now review your work ... although I don't really have much to say. Sorry about that in advance. I did read your first bit, but ...

Hello! Good work on this piece. It does seem a bit like Nightmare on Elm Street doesn't it? Although Freddy Kruger didn't come into the real world deliberately to hunt ...

Hello! I'm El, and I will be critiquing your work. Overall I liked it! You had some good description and some intriguing ideas! The night must have been confused. I ...

Hey. 'tis I. Feel free to ignore anything I say. You know the drill. “We shouldn’t be doing this,” Jonas hissed. “It’s wrong.” I don't like your first line. I'm ...

Hey! I'm El. I liked your piece. It flowed well, and I always understood what was happening. The girl gently drifted to the ground and knelt down in the grass, ...

Hello! My name is El, and I will be your reviewer this evening. I liked your piece. It was interesting. You are right, there are similarities to both Artemis Fowl ...

Um ... my brother is sitting here with me and for some reason has the desire to tell you his favourite books. I think he's bored. Anyway ... MY BROTHER: ...