Eimear

Hey, I liked reading this. We're doing about the Cold War in History, so it was really cool to see it put by a good writer into a dramatic story. ...

Hey, I don't have much time to review this so I'll be quick....writing and homework beckons! Nice job mate. Seriously. I reads very nicely indeed, its clear that your not ...

Hey- and welcome to YWS, I hope you stick around, because I love to review a nice bit of poetry every now and then. Ok, at a glance- I liked ...

*Nods head approvingly* Two words for this one. Spot. On. But It would be cruel to only give you those, so I'm gonna tell you what I like about this ...

A true gem of a poem. Most of what a felt about it has already been voiced (all good stuff), but the bit that really sold it for me is ...

I liked this ok, although it didnt really move me. The reptition of 'eyes' is good to begin with, but it gets a little jarring after a while: I see ...

That was a pretty good piece, a lot like the stuff I like to read every now and then. Nate seems like a really nice guy, and I already hate ...

Heyhey, your work is coming along very nicely indeed. This was a great piece. I enjoyed the way your thoughts flowed well, for example this line is fab: I’m holding ...

Hey, I agree, the whole thing is far to cliched and obvious for me to get into it. The names echo a lot of fantasy fiction, and I felt as ...

This is a good enough poem, but I agree, it sends the emo alarm bells in my ears ringing, the first two lines in particular As i touched his frozen ...

Hmmm, yes, yes I enjoyed this. The title was what really drew me in (FYI-The Dance of the Dead- great). The general idea and the way your thoughts meandered and ...

Heyhey, a funny and orginal poem, a complete gem! It's actually quite a feat to write a good poem about the act of writing, so well done you. I especially ...

This is totally unlike anything I've read before. I guess that's why I like it so much. The repitition is good, as well as the expressionistic methods we'd usually relate ...

Hey, nice idea for a poem. I liked certain aspects of this, but there's no getting away from the repitition, which, gets a little tiring to read to say the ...

Heyhey, I really enjoyed reading this, expecially the way it was blank verse so you really went to town with your poetic voice, not having to worry too much about ...