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Eimear

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In war, victory is a vision

    I want to go out on my neck and review the poem in terms of how I understood and related to it. I think it's comparing the fact that ones ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life

    I think it would be better to name this poem 'Irony' because that's the overriding theme I got from it. I wrote a review for this before but my connection ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pain

    You wrote a whole poem without realizing it? I wish I was the same, it's so darn hard for me to get the words down and look half decent. Firstly, ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: About something

    Um...wow D. This was subtely amazing, to be honest. The first line really did it for me. Your techniques are great, and the whole poem just seems- neat. Not too ...

    May 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fear

    Awk shucks. I wrote a blooming awesome review and then my computer did something very funny. I wasn't laughing. Ok, a few things here. Of course, firstly I'm going to ...

    May 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The first of June

    I did a weird thing and read the comments before the poem. Strange perhaps? Very. But I'm backtracking again, back to the poem. I'll have to disagree with most of ...

    May 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: May I Have This Dance

    I'll have to disagree with one of Suzanne's points. I didn't think it was too long at all. I didn't want it to end. This piece really took me off ...

    May 4, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: An ode to sarcasm

    I love rambeling! Not- if you're so inclined- around the countryside in shorts and walking boots...yikes- no, this type of rambeling! A thought! A spark- almost an arguement with oneself ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: The truth about shoes

    Haha. This was funny. Eimear liked it. A few issues I have are it's length...it's a bit short? Maybe expand it a little and make me laugh more? Also, the ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    Alright lets take a little look at this...Firstly I'm going to tell it to you straight. I liked it. Had you worried there, didnt I? Hehe, the descriptions are great, ...

    May 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Faith

    Nice. Although it works well as short and sweet, I reckon you could make it truly epic by developing some of the issues raised. Great last line as well. PM ...

    May 1, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: One to Midnight

    Hmm....interesting. Ok, this is a great start, and I mean that. Just a couple of things to note and then you should be full steam ahead. Firstly, paragraph your peice- ...

    Mar 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: For the Win

    Cool....the title drew me in for sure. 'For the win' is heartfelt and kind of gutsy if you catch my drift, I knew right before I read it that it ...

    Feb 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Emotion of Anger

    Hmm, i liked this....very nice indeed. You wrote it with gritty intention, and that's what I as a reader got. Your title is 'The Emotion of Anger' and I felt ...

    Feb 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A poem for you

    Ooo, this one sent shivers down my spine- a great bit of poetry! *Rubs hands* This piece is absoultely dripping with great metaphores. Seriously dude. They're spot on. The first ...

    Feb 21, 2008


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