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Re: In war, victory is a vision
I want to go out on my neck and review the poem in terms of how I understood and related to it. I think it's comparing the fact that ones ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Life
I think it would be better to name this poem 'Irony' because that's the overriding theme I got from it. I wrote a review for this before but my connection ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Pain
You wrote a whole poem without realizing it? I wish I was the same, it's so darn hard for me to get the words down and look half decent. Firstly, ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: About something
Um...wow D. This was subtely amazing, to be honest. The first line really did it for me. Your techniques are great, and the whole poem just seems- neat. Not too ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Fear
Awk shucks. I wrote a blooming awesome review and then my computer did something very funny. I wasn't laughing. Ok, a few things here. Of course, firstly I'm going to ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: The first of June
I did a weird thing and read the comments before the poem. Strange perhaps? Very. But I'm backtracking again, back to the poem. I'll have to disagree with most of ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: May I Have This Dance
I'll have to disagree with one of Suzanne's points. I didn't think it was too long at all. I didn't want it to end. This piece really took me off ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: An ode to sarcasm
I love rambeling! Not- if you're so inclined- around the countryside in shorts and walking boots...yikes- no, this type of rambeling! A thought! A spark- almost an arguement with oneself ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: The truth about shoes
Haha. This was funny. Eimear liked it. A few issues I have are it's length...it's a bit short? Maybe expand it a little and make me laugh more? Also, the ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Broken
Alright lets take a little look at this...Firstly I'm going to tell it to you straight. I liked it. Had you worried there, didnt I? Hehe, the descriptions are great, ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Faith
Nice. Although it works well as short and sweet, I reckon you could make it truly epic by developing some of the issues raised. Great last line as well. PM ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: One to Midnight
Hmm....interesting. Ok, this is a great start, and I mean that. Just a couple of things to note and then you should be full steam ahead. Firstly, paragraph your peice- ...
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: For the Win
Cool....the title drew me in for sure. 'For the win' is heartfelt and kind of gutsy if you catch my drift, I knew right before I read it that it ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: The Emotion of Anger
Hmm, i liked this....very nice indeed. You wrote it with gritty intention, and that's what I as a reader got. Your title is 'The Emotion of Anger' and I felt ...
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: A poem for you
Ooo, this one sent shivers down my spine- a great bit of poetry! *Rubs hands* This piece is absoultely dripping with great metaphores. Seriously dude. They're spot on. The first ...
Feb 21, 2008
