Eferhilda

Eferhilda here for a review. In regards to the essay it was informative and helpful. Only criticism there would be to work on your transition sentences, so that one paragraph ...

Hey! Eferhilda here with a review for you. There are a lot of the grammatical errors and such, as you mentioned so I won't spend any time on that. As ...

I am a rather sappy person and this definitely tugged at my heart strings, as well as made me rather hungry for some candy lol Though that is more of ...

Wow. That was probably one of the most moving pieces I have ever read in regards to the subject. I love the format and how it is structured, it really ...

Really, can't find anything wrong with this piece, so I will just talk about the good. I love the eloquent flow from one line to the next. I love how ...

Efer here to drop a review for you :) Well, the title did make me think that I would be reading something about a cave, or dwelling. Even maybe something ...

Dying has never been so beautiful and entertaining. I can feel the life as it slowly drains from the character and be with her as she panics and realizes that ...

I think that you had a great start, but then you kind of rushed it? At least that is how it felt to me. I love werewolves and everything about ...

I can picture this as something colored similar to how Sin City was done. Black and white, save for a few key areas which would be bright and brilliant color. ...

Well, I have never been much of a fan for my little ponies, save for the older version (but I am old lol) It was a little hard to know ...

Firstly, I love werewolves! Second this was very clever in the way that you crafted this story, I was not expecting the werewolf part as I was merely expecting to ...

I really love the way you paint the scene and set the mood. You place the reader dead center in the middle of this situation in such a way that ...

This is something that I can really relate to, if only because of my own sexuality. Even today it is not so clear cut and dry. Acceptance is a constant ...

Wow. Now, there were just a few errors here and there, mainly in the formatting of the dialogue in the beginning. Then there were a few misspelled or missed used ...