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Re: Sweet Carcosa
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Mar 20, 2025
This poem is a haunting and evocative ode to Carcosa, the mythical city of madness and mystery. It carries a deep, almost hypnotic longing—a yearning to return to something both ... -
Re: Everything About Him
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Mar 20, 2025
This poem is a beautiful declaration of love, filled with admiration, warmth, and devotion. The repetition of "I love the way" acts like a steady heartbeat, reinforcing the depth and ... -
Re: I want to be a bloodless animal
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Mar 20, 2025
The opening lines hit like a bullet to the bone, the demand is paradoxical, an instruction defying logic yet embodying emotional reality. "Shoot my leg, but don’t I dare bleed"—a ... -
Re: Arrival (Chapter 4-ish) *Rough Draft
I love the use of the word "squished" in the first paragraph. A word not used enough in literature, in my opinion. Also the idea of "freaky crawly sloth things". ...
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Re: Return to Eden Prologue
This is gooooood (yes all the o's are completely necessary). It's short, but it is a bold precursor for things to come. This is such a smart idea, the bunkers. ...
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Re: Pull me under the wave and trap me in silence
This poem, I Wake Up in a World Painted with Shadows, is a striking exploration of the emotional volatility and internal strife that accompany living with mental health struggles, particularly ...
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Re: numb
This poem, sometimes, i don't feel blessed to exist, powerfully articulates the emotional dissonance and inner conflict that arises from experiencing numbness, isolation, and the exhaustion of living
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Re: I like Salt
This poem, I Like Salt, is an intriguing, layered exploration of emotion, self-awareness, and a deep-seated relationship with both physical and psychological pain. Through the repeated motif of salt,
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Re: burning farewell
This poem, Goodbye, Oh god it's not really what's inside, is an emotional exploration of love, loss, and the conflict between personal desire and fate. It captures a moment of ...
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Re: typewriters, ribbons, and printwheels
That is a super cool animation. This reminds me of the one insane rant thing on a shirt on the tiktok shop. Does anybody know what I'm talking about? Am ...
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Re: separation in rain
Such a beautifully written poem. It conveys a lot of emotions through other mediums, which I guess is most poetry. The rain is beautiful, and there is beauty in the, ...
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Re: I Want You to Be Okay
This is such a beautifully written poem. I've definitely been in relationships like this, and not just romantic ones. You can't be happy because the other person isn't happy. Its ...
Nov 10, 2024
