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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Sweet Carcosa

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    This poem is a haunting and evocative ode to Carcosa, the mythical city of madness and mystery. It carries a deep, almost hypnotic longing—a yearning to return to something both ...

    Mar 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Everything About Him

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    This poem is a beautiful declaration of love, filled with admiration, warmth, and devotion. The repetition of "I love the way" acts like a steady heartbeat, reinforcing the depth and ...

    Mar 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I want to be a bloodless animal

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    The opening lines hit like a bullet to the bone, the demand is paradoxical, an instruction defying logic yet embodying emotional reality. "Shoot my leg, but don’t I dare bleed"—a ...

    Mar 20, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Arrival (Chapter 4-ish) *Rough Draft

    I love the use of the word "squished" in the first paragraph. A word not used enough in literature, in my opinion. Also the idea of "freaky crawly sloth things". ...

    Nov 14, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Return to Eden Prologue

    This is gooooood (yes all the o's are completely necessary). It's short, but it is a bold precursor for things to come. This is such a smart idea, the bunkers. ...

    Nov 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Pull me under the wave and trap me in silence

    This poem, I Wake Up in a World Painted with Shadows, is a striking exploration of the emotional volatility and internal strife that accompany living with mental health struggles, particularly ...

    Nov 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: numb

    This poem, sometimes, i don't feel blessed to exist, powerfully articulates the emotional dissonance and inner conflict that arises from experiencing numbness, isolation, and the exhaustion of living

    Nov 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: I like Salt

    This poem, I Like Salt, is an intriguing, layered exploration of emotion, self-awareness, and a deep-seated relationship with both physical and psychological pain. Through the repeated motif of salt,

    Nov 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, Teen Fiction Re: burning farewell

    This poem, Goodbye, Oh god it's not really what's inside, is an emotional exploration of love, loss, and the conflict between personal desire and fate. It captures a moment of ...

    Nov 14, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: typewriters, ribbons, and printwheels

    That is a super cool animation. This reminds me of the one insane rant thing on a shirt on the tiktok shop. Does anybody know what I'm talking about? Am ...

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: separation in rain

    Such a beautifully written poem. It conveys a lot of emotions through other mediums, which I guess is most poetry. The rain is beautiful, and there is beauty in the, ...

    Nov 10, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I Want You to Be Okay

    This is such a beautifully written poem. I've definitely been in relationships like this, and not just romantic ones. You can't be happy because the other person isn't happy. Its ...

    Nov 10, 2024


Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle