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Such a beautiful sonnet!!Everything is perfect in there..everything well expressed..but lacks proper presentation and punctuation..but other than that its alright..:-):-)

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Hi!I am going to be the third reviewer...anyways, this poem is so much overwhelming that it simply pulls you inside has so much expression...and really it has such an unique ...

My I am so forgetful. I just forgot to tick on the check box and thus ended up submitting 2 reviews.

It is a very nice poem for a newbie but hey you get better as you write more. Anyway, I will review your work today. Firstly, the basic layout of ...

A very nice poem I should say. It was well written and one can say that you have really put a lot of work into it. There are no faults ...

That is a very cute and touching poem you have in there. The subject of the poem is your pet dog I presume. Usually people write very brief and general ...

Sorry for the mistake in one of the lines but the last line is:- "we will surely meet again someday...."

I REALLY LIKED THE POEM. IT WAS VERY MEANINGFUL AND IT WAS JUST PRECISE. IT WAS NEITHER TOO SHORT OR TOO LONG AND I LIKED IT THAT YOU COULD EXPRESS ...

These simple few words hold so much meaning that I cannot explain. But, it was nice - the quote I mean. You are a new member so I think I ...

I liked the poem very much. It had a very dark and real tone in it. After reading it I felt like WHOAH! It is really a land of waking ...

WHAT a nice mysterious story that was!! I liked almost everything but things were a bit vague in some parts. Anyway keep writing!!

I liked this poem very much. friends are friends after all and you have written about them beautifully. this poem s awesome!!!!! :D

This poem was very bulky. You could have tried dividing it into stanzas. Other than that I really liked the poem. It was very sad and tragic. Also, try giving ...

This poem was very bulky. You could have tried dividing it into stanzas. Other than that I really liked the poem. It was very sad and tragic. Also, try giving ...

IT seems really to be a rather nice poem. I also liked the song version of the poem. Looks like you are really serious about this person. But no, I ...