Published November 7, 2011
Forever isn't today or tommorow its now.
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Very good,er, quote. It holds a nice and complex meaning, a meaning so deep that it honestly took me a good minute to figure it out. Like said before, it needs proper punctuation so that it's not a run-on sentence. All in all, though, very good, uh, quote. I see that you're a new member and I wish you luck getting around here. It's a really friendly site and I'm sure you'll enjoy yourself here. I hope to see you around, and keep writing!
These simple few words hold so much meaning that I cannot explain. But, it was nice - the quote I mean. You are a new member so I think I shall wish you good luck and keep writing.
Okay dasiamari here to review your...sentence. Okay this is good but a little cliche. You also spelled tomorrow wrong.(I always do!) And it says your a new user so welcome! Maybe you can find someplace else to post this also, since this is not a poem.
So it will look like this
Forever isn't today, or tomorrow, its now.