Published October 26, 2011
Friends are friends.
They will be there when you cry
They will be there when you are happy
They will be there to calm you down when you get angry
Real friends should always be there for you
Real friends should always be there no matter what
Friends should be happy when you have good fortune
Friends should be there to comfort when you are feeling down
Friends should be there to cool you off when mad
A friend is someone who is amazing
A friend is a person who is real to you
A friend is to back you up whenever where ever
A friend is also a person who keeps your deepest, darkest secrets
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Hi beautyOFwriting.
Nice poem but I guess they are lot of mistakes to be corrected.
The blue markings will be your mistakes and the red markings are the corrections.
Phew! There are lot of mistakes. Considering that English isn't you first language. Not being really rude, I'm just trying to help. =)
Plus here: This stanza:
And this stanza:
The first stanza must have been second and the last stanza at first because when you speak about friends, You describe them first. Don't describe them last since that's your title, okay?
Overall: I liked it but if you could work on your comma's and structure of the stanza's/sentences, then I think you can be one great writer! ^.^
Keep writing! xD
Cheers,
Cookie <3
True words! Friends are important and are the only people who can ever understand us for who we are. Congratulations on your first post here and I'm looking forward to reading more! Remember, keep writing and keep practicing. That way, you'll even better than you already are.
Great job and keep the ink flowing!
I liked this poem very much. friends are friends after all and you have written about them beautifully. this poem s awesome!!!!!