Dutiful

Heyya! Dutiful here for a review! :) Okay, so this is a vampire story. I have nothing against them :D I have no problems whatsoever with it being a vampire ...

Hello! Dutiful reporting for duty. Review time! :) This story has definitely got me intrigued! I have no idea whether it is a paranormal story or suspense thriller! EXCELLENT JOB!!! ...

Hello!! Dutiful here reporting to duty! Haha :) Welcome to YWS!! Here's my review: This story here is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You can't help but feel for the protagonist, her ...

Okay, wow that is one beautiful poem there :) I'm a fan of reading poetry and I guess I can interpret each line in a whole new way. But my ...

Hello, Dutiful here doing her duty :D Review time! Okay, let me just say this. The story is very cliche. I'm guessing this is a real life incident. But the ...

Hiyya! Review time! :D Okay, let me say this. You've got me intrigued as to what the story is. It certainly keeps me thinking. Its short. It could have been ...

Okay, review time! :D First of all let me just go a little bit fan girl-y over here(Minus the screaming) and say, "I LOVED THIS!!!!!!" I kind of got the ...

I would love to review, but you have to know poetry is not my strongest point. I enjoy reading them though. But when it comes to writing and reviewing, I'm ...

Hey there! The concept of this piece is pretty good! But I think the way you executed it was a bit flawed. I felt this piece could have been a ...

Hey there! Here for a review! :) I love this story! Its good, like really good! Its almost predictable, but I love it! I hope you add some twists in ...

Well, first of all, Hello! Welcome to YWS! I'm also new here :) Here's what I thought of this chapter: This chapter is very well written. You've done a good ...

Oh my gosh, its only my steely resolve that has prevented me from crying right now. What a sad, sad story. Why did she have to kill herself? There's no ...

Wow, this is one helluva story!! I loved it!! Actually I didn't mind the formality of the language at all. It was refreshing from all the slang that we usually ...

Hiya! Dutiful here to review your work: I read the prologue, I found it very interesting. I didn't review as it seemed that many had already pointed out the errors:) ...

Hiya! This topic is quite different and you've done a good job with it:) Okay here's my review: I liked how you've described the mirror as a companion, but I ...