Duskglimmer

I liked this. It was really simple and I really liked that. But the ending just didn't work for me. The whole "I've died now and I'll watch you from ...

I liked reading this, but I my mind got caught up in the line "east of the sun and west of the moon". I just read a book called "East", ...

I liked reading this. I didn't mind the choppyness of it, because it simply worked. Why it worked here and not other places I've seen, I have no idea, but ...

This is really impressive. I couldn't stop reading it. My only problem with it, is that you never actually told what happened to her that night. My mind sort of ...

*laughs hysterically as her IQ steadily falls* So when you want to call your squirkies into the room do you say "Come to me my quirky squirkies?"? Are you still ...

I agree with Carmina. It would work better for me if it just read "I smiled down at the realtor. 'Sold.'" Besides that, I think it would work better if ...

I think that this is really good, but it was sort of depressing for me just because I know a couple of people that could very well end up being ...

Okay... every body calm down... Kutestuff - Nikki was not attacking you or the feelings or thoughts that inspired this poem. All she was saying was that the poem itself ...

Over all... nice job. I really liked most of it... "Dad, For all the times I whined For all the times I cried For all those little toys I wanted ...

Testing out the site, huh? I did that when I first got here too... *looks innocent* but anyway... my opinion: It was another teen agnst poem... it portrayed what was ...

You told us EVERYTHING in this poem and left nothing implied. It doesn't pull our emotions into the poem, it merely tries to tell us what emotion is in a ...

Well... now that everyone else has beat this up... I liked this... The tone of the poem was very calm, very serene, and it seemed to fit the scene that ...

I don't know if you still need people to reply to this, but just in case: I'm homeschooled, and by some odd twist of fate, I ended up home alone ...

Any of the series by R.A. Salvatore ( The Dark Elf Trilogy, The Icewind Dale Trilogy, The Legacy of the Drow Quartet, The Paths of Darkness Quartet, The Hunter's Blades ...

It's not generally the kind of thing that I read. Honestly, I don't know what I'm supposed to come away thinking, besides the fact that everyone involved in this is ...