Dreamy

Hey Rainbow, "Conflict is difficult to resolve" is a very good theme. I appreciate you for trying out something so different, unless it's not a school essay work :P It ...

Hey there! "The stairway of revenge" this is a really good story. I liked it and I also found it funny. I liked the way you have made this story. ...

Hi, and as therealme says that is indeed a very good start you should keep going with this story. Though there is something that I felt to be corrected and ...

Look who is here to review :P Hi~ Okay, with your "Mafia Love" title I expected something dark, but definitely not darker like this.I liked what you said in here,not ...

Hey Gaurav, Let me go on with the review. "Fear" is indeed a very good title. :D Let me remind you again that I didn't read your previous chapters. This ...

Now, that's exactly what I wanted. A bloody party :P To be honest with you this was way too bloody. As I said before you are a very good narrator ...

Aw, why did you stopped there? I wanted to know what happened. Hey there, Dreamy here to review. Let me start the review with a truth, I don't really like ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review (Isn't really a review :P ) "Spemnon Asylum" was like a rescue to me. Thank god psychotic novel writers are really isn't dead :P ...

Hey Dude :P I like "Dudes" I mean the word not the, umm the guys. I do like them but uhhh.... Okay, lets go with the review. :P Well, your ...

Hey Anshira, I really loved your poem. It was simple yet addictive. There was a plain truth and also hard feelings beautifully put together. But that was the biggest mistake ...

Hey Rachel, look what you have done to me? I can't stop smiling! This was really a very good essay. You are a very good philosopher umm, a life-sayer (that's ...

Hey Hope, Dreamy here to review. This chapter was really very interesting. I liked it. You have problems like every other newbies, I had it myself. You should learn your ...

Hey, this isn't awful. Trying new things is never awful :P This is good. I won't say better than the real one. It's just good in a different way. Since ...

Hi Dreamy here to review, That was a very good question you have asked in the end of your essay. And the title was catchy. It's difficult to make people ...

Hey Spheal, Dreamy here again. So the mistakes, "To a man that stands behind......" It's "a man who was standing behind..." And that's all I could find. For every new ...