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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dreams of Giants

    And Dreamworx, the fact that you found my characters funny is likely due to their competitive aggressiveness. ;) Or maybe it is just you. :p Eh, who knows? Maybe I ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Life CHAPTER 2

    Wow...interesting. Gruesome, too. Lots of blood and gore... Okay, first thing's first: there were waaayyy too many mistakes. Both grammatical and spelling errors. There were commas misplaced, mispelle

    Mar 18, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Land of Tales ~ Chapter One

    * drops out of the sky and into your living room * Hey, Meadow! What's up? This was soooo good! Very enjoyable. Please point out if I changed the Horseman's ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Land of Tales ~ Chapter One

    Hey Meadow! Nice to see that you're moving forward with this story. Question: What happened to the bickering brothers in the Faeries? I'd like to hear more from them. I ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Life CHAPTER 2

    Hey, Rubin! I looked over this chapter and I thought it was really good. Unfortunately, I'm trying to finish the next part of my story, so I won't be able ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: LIfE

    Huh. Wow. Well, that was...interesting. In a good way, I really, really enjoyed that. It's really not something you read very often. I love the MC's crude sense of humor. ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dreams of Giants

    Hey, this is really good! Particularly, the title drew me in. The dialogue flowed very well between characters, I didn't feel like any of it was forced, which is something ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Land of Tales~Prologue

    Hey, Meadow! So, some of my making-fun-fairytales quirk has rubbed off on you, eh? Glad to hear it, glad to hear it. We need more of these kinds of stories, ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Five)

    Guess what? This is my 100th review! Yay! Well, I guess I've been waiting for this for...well, not as long as some other people, but long enough. As fantastic as ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Accidental Rebellion, Ch. 1 - Fate

    Whew! Okay, lots to say about this one. I have to say, I commend you for gram&spell perfection. I couldn't find anything wrong with it grammar wise. Sentences read smoothly ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Diaries of a Teenage Vampire: Chapter One

    Hey, welcome to YWS! Okay, first of all, I think this is in the wrong section. I believe it should be in the "scripts" forum, considering that this is only ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Four)

    Whew. That was pretty heavy. I suspect that at least one reader wants my head on a pike at the moment , Well, you're right there. I was hoping you ...

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Piper Legend (Prologue~Edited)

    Ahh, I enjoyed this very much. The descriptions were absolutely breathtaking. Are you seriously only thirteen? Wow. Insane, sis. Since you mentioned that the piper seemed deceptive "underneath his hon

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Three)

    I really, really don't like the whole instant kill spell... thing. It just doesn't work, it's really contrived, and I ... ugh. I just can't think of a way to ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Two)

    And if you need help deciding, think of this: many people, many, many people, have died and suffered on both sides of this war; all for the sake of Kagami’s ...

    Mar 9, 2009


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