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Re: idk
One day, I'm going to announce my love of you and all your poetry to the world in a big, flashy celebration with Richard Siken readings and big party hats ...
Jul 22, 2012 -
Re: Cinderella
So I've been meaning to get around to this review for the past couple days and just haven't found the chance to do so. Nonetheless, I'm here, as per usual, ...
Jul 18, 2012 -
Re: Proving the True
The first half of this poem is omnomnom worthy. And I mean that in the highest regards, of course ;). Nonetheless, it was that particular beginning that drew me into ...
Jul 11, 2012 -
Re: woman
Generally speaking, I feel I would have fallen in love with a piece like this if the sentiment wasn't one I've heard many times before. The kind of sentiment that ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: travel
Intestines. There is certainly a decent amount of originality in the thought process, love. The kind of thought process I expect, coming from you, which is nice. Because I always ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: the gardener
I've read this every single day for the past four days trying to come to terms with it and the meaning it's supposed to bring forth. Sometimes I wonder how ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: aliss the skin golem
Alright, so I thought I'd get around to that review I promised. Just a few different nit-picks here and there, and an quick note on ideologies as well. Anyways, the ...
Jun 21, 2012 -
Re: My Momma's Crayons
Thought I'd return the favor, love ;). I adore narrative poetry like this. It's often a miss, and something extremely hard to channel when it comes to multifaceted imagery and ...
Jun 14, 2012 -
Re: Nature- Her magnificence.
I don't particularly think the review before this really did you or this poem any justice. It touched on some of the structure which, in poetry, really should only play ...
Jun 13, 2012 -
Re: Jane
I'm not much of a structure fan, myself, so don't worry about any critiques on that. I was actually more interested in two specific lines that kind of bugged me. ...
Jun 13, 2012 -
Re: Sure As Nature
I can see the gears are clicking, dear. And they are moving in the right direction, but there are definitely some bits that need to be sorted in this case ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Sacraments
When I opened this document, the first thing that popped into my mind was that your structure did not necessary constitute basic poetry structure, which is probably why this is ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: A Poem With No Words (Feelings)
What an interesting structure choice. I, like Lav, was drawn by the title. And the idea, as she stated, is a rather interesting one. But I will have to disagree ...
Jun 11, 2012 -
Re: Do not fear and No mistake
Structure and form, to me, don't exactly go hand in hand with poetry at all times. So when it comes to something like this, I really have nothing to say ...
Jun 11, 2012 -
Re: we pull each other apart with our gravities
This is a powerful piece of work, love. Maybe not because of the fact that the theme doesn't really make itself known throughout the wording, but because of the fact ...
Jun 11, 2012
