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Re: Deleted 32
First of all, I adore this structure. Clear and decisive paragraphs rather than stanzas, but with all the same force. My mind immediately flew to You Are Jeff which is, ...
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: The last time I really cried
This poem is a really stunning piece, Karz. There's a certain fluidity to both stanza's that stand out well on their own. The brash clever wordplay of the first which ...
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: Deleted 31
You have no idea how much I've missed this. Just hhhhnnnggg. There is something really special about your prose-poetry. Though your poetry is strong, and extremely, over-the-top metaphorical in the ...
Nov 15, 2012 -
Re: Hidden in the Closet
All good poetry is a slow revealing of truths, in in which case, no matter what you choose to portray, you believe in what you're saying. This is something I ...
Nov 1, 2012 -
Re: We're Scared of the Dark Because We've Seen What's There When the Lights Were On
I've been meaning to get to this, seeing as you've reviewed my work on more than one occasion, so I feel very much obliged to that fact. So, without further ...
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: Kiss
I don't know if I want to say you have a gift for expression, or you just really wanted to write in a way that sounded artsy but had not ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Diana
You know, it's rather hard reviewing a poem that holds some extremely personal and ultimately upsetting material. After all, this wasn't written on a whim. There is a very unsubtle ...
Oct 2, 2012 -
Re: Deleted
Seeing as you've reviewed quite a few of my pieces over the past little while, I thought I would return the favour. Mind you, I'm a bit of a rambler, ...
Oct 1, 2012 -
Re: I Am
First and foremost, welcome to YWS! Though, I suppose, I may not be the best reviewer for your first one. Nonetheless, I will try to keep myself rather tame. This ...
Sep 30, 2012 -
Re: Lavender
Hm. I don't know if I love this, or hate it. In some ways, I suppose it would be both, which is a really good sign you're on your way ...
Sep 30, 2012 -
Re: Barriers
Sometimes, I really like this style. More often then not, though, I quite dislike it. It makes lines look so fragmented and unstable, while certain structure helps keep a poem ...
Sep 30, 2012 -
Re: sleepless
You don't know how excited I am right now. Honestly, I read this on tumblr and thought 'I really, really, really want to review this', and then here it is. ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
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Maybe I'm just not getting 'it'. Raw emotion is powerful. A big reason why things like poetic license seem so common placed these days. After all, why capitalize words when ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: seeing things how we'd like to
There is so much good in this I can't even. Honestly, sometimes you post something that's relatively decent, and the passion is always evident, but then there are those moments ...
Aug 24, 2012 -
Re: Brielle, I remembered you today.
I am always, always obliged when asked for a review ;). So, of course, I should be quite happy to review this piece for you today. With that being said, ...
Aug 12, 2012
