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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted 32

    First of all, I adore this structure. Clear and decisive paragraphs rather than stanzas, but with all the same force. My mind immediately flew to You Are Jeff which is, ...

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The last time I really cried

    This poem is a really stunning piece, Karz. There's a certain fluidity to both stanza's that stand out well on their own. The brash clever wordplay of the first which ...

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted 31

    You have no idea how much I've missed this. Just hhhhnnnggg. There is something really special about your prose-poetry. Though your poetry is strong, and extremely, over-the-top metaphorical in the ...

    Nov 15, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hidden in the Closet

    All good poetry is a slow revealing of truths, in in which case, no matter what you choose to portray, you believe in what you're saying. This is something I ...

    Nov 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: We're Scared of the Dark Because We've Seen What's There When the Lights Were On

    I've been meaning to get to this, seeing as you've reviewed my work on more than one occasion, so I feel very much obliged to that fact. So, without further ...

    Oct 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Kiss

    I don't know if I want to say you have a gift for expression, or you just really wanted to write in a way that sounded artsy but had not ...

    Oct 14, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Diana

    You know, it's rather hard reviewing a poem that holds some extremely personal and ultimately upsetting material. After all, this wasn't written on a whim. There is a very unsubtle ...

    Oct 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted

    Seeing as you've reviewed quite a few of my pieces over the past little while, I thought I would return the favour. Mind you, I'm a bit of a rambler, ...

    Oct 1, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Am

    First and foremost, welcome to YWS! Though, I suppose, I may not be the best reviewer for your first one. Nonetheless, I will try to keep myself rather tame. This ...

    Sep 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Lavender

    Hm. I don't know if I love this, or hate it. In some ways, I suppose it would be both, which is a really good sign you're on your way ...

    Sep 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Barriers

    Sometimes, I really like this style. More often then not, though, I quite dislike it. It makes lines look so fragmented and unstable, while certain structure helps keep a poem ...

    Sep 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sleepless

    You don't know how excited I am right now. Honestly, I read this on tumblr and thought 'I really, really, really want to review this', and then here it is. ...

    Sep 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re:

    Maybe I'm just not getting 'it'. Raw emotion is powerful. A big reason why things like poetic license seem so common placed these days. After all, why capitalize words when ...

    Sep 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: seeing things how we'd like to

    There is so much good in this I can't even. Honestly, sometimes you post something that's relatively decent, and the passion is always evident, but then there are those moments ...

    Aug 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Brielle, I remembered you today.

    I am always, always obliged when asked for a review ;). So, of course, I should be quite happy to review this piece for you today. With that being said, ...

    Aug 12, 2012


[as a roleplayer is feeling sad about torturing her characters] GrandWild: "You're a writer, dear. Embrace it."
— GrandWild