DreamlikeNightmare

I like this,but at the first part you change POV.You were in third,then went to just tweaks with me,other than that it was an awesome work.

YAY!i like this,but im kinda really slow and stuff and i dont think i know what a sonnet is.

OMG this was amazing,i love how you wrote this about your dreams,everything was amazing and i just really like this.

I like this work,its very nice but this little peev of mine is going to bug me until i say something about the third line from the bottom,you have their ...

Oh.My.Potato.That was effing amazing,hahaha I wanna know what happens now sooooooooo badly.

I wish i could be a murderer,it sounds like fun.Just a little...

FUCK YES.I finally got it to work,school doesnt suck so bad now,yay computers!

I am in love with this.This is so amazing,I wouldnt change anything.

I would put it in the poem format,but i dont have a computer so its really hard to figure this stuff out right now lol.

Youre welcome *smiley face rainbow cow magic sparkle bunny marshallow happy fun time face?*

I really should clear that up a bit,i have to edit.And her 'fragile blue turned icy grey' i meant her eyes.I was writing this on my phone so everything was ...

This makes me think of something i think might have happened to me,i dont really know,i dont remember things good was probably important at one point,oh well.I liked this poem,it ...