DreamWork

Hello there, just a quick review on your story. While reading them, I was thinking of one style of writing you got here. It is quite impressing, but still neef ...

Hello there, dream with a quick review on your wonderful poem. Honestly, I was quite impressed with the first stanza in your poem. I think you have a very strong ...

Hello there, just a quick review on your poem ;) It really makes me a bit unnerved when reading it. Honestly, the idea that you gave is quite brilliant, but ...

Hello there, I seemed to be quite impressed by the way you write a poem to express love. It does not look horrible (which is written for the fun of ...

Hello there, I really like the concept here. You have provides the meaning of 'promises' in accordance with the poet's own understanding. With only provides two lines in the poem ...

Hi sis, just a quick review on your poem. Honestly, I really liked your poem when it come into a theme of friendship. It will always be a nice thing ...

Hi there, first of all, welcome to YWS! Just a quick review here. Your poem is amazing. I like the monologue/dialogue in the poem, though in the end it was ...

Hello there! I liked the concept you made here. Although it is simple, the effect is more than what is seen. You give two possibilities, maybe even two different options. ...

Hi there! I was quite impressed with the imagery you provide in your poem. You describe the flakes nicely and with imagination. Although some, I not quite understand. Lightly drop ...

Hi Deane! Have a nice day. I think what I like most about this story is because it has a lot of dialogue to read. And of course I like ...

Hi there, I really like your poem. The tone of voice and the way you convey the poem was so enthralling. Let me make some analysis on it and tell ...

Hello there! Talking about the format (the way you deliver the poem) it is not too bad. Actually it is in line with the tone of voice you gave. Readers ...

Hi there, have a nice day! Lengthy poem that is full of dramatic elements. I love how you create the character of Lucifer with your own sense. Although it is ...

Hi there! I never expecting a poem that looks frightening than the title (like wait, could it be a cheese?). Going straight to the point, in terms of diction, it ...

Hello there! A quick review on your poem. I agree with the review below, I think you already have a good idea to reflect on. But you can still extend ...