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Re: For Fear Replaces Peace
Hi wewinwelose, Dream with review on your poem. Your poem highlights how politics and government ostensibly just pretending for the sake of liberty and security for the people.It's a bit ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: Language of the Eyes
Hi krizshelbenalycabral, Dream with quick review on your poem. Through the title of the poem, it provides an initial overview of the content you will write. Language of eyes, a ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: Midnight Poetry
Hi sl4y41zm3,Dream with quick review on your poem. Midnight Poetry. So the title might be a bit trick here. I thought it was about the poem that was written in ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: The Unsaid Things
Hi Sparkle,Dream with review on your poem. The title caught my attention to read it. It is an external reflection of what you will try to convey in your poem. ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: Going Home
Hi vivalamusica, quick review on your short story. What I like your writing style is that it is structured with details although sometimes felt clumsy with simple sentence structure. Almost ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: Graying
Hi fortis, here is a review on your wonderful poem. I should start by saying that your poem is so interesting with the use of effective diction.I will not comment ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: When The Rain Falls - Chapter 03
Hi SunsetSprite, DK with quick review on your story^^ Something captures my attention immediately at the first paragraph of your story. It is about a mysterious girl who go out ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: The Hardest Choice
Hi MysteryMe, DK with review on your poem. This is so sad because I love dogs and I also do dog care service because it is also heartening. So I ...
Oct 12, 2013 -
Re: Kat is Cray
Hi Jcsmooth,DK with quick review on your poem. Your poem perfectly in terms of diction and rhythms that run smoothly without any hurdle. I was glad when reading it! It's ...
Oct 12, 2013 -
Re: Illusion - Chapter One (2/2)
Hi EnigmaticSpirit,DK with quick review on your story/novel in chapter 1. Your writing style is unpretentious and easy to understand. And you use the first person 'I' as the main ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: Grades don't equal you.
Hi NerdFighter1,DK with a quick review on your poem. What I liked about the poem is the perfection in rhythm. I'm comfortable when declamation the poem. Secondly, it is true. ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: Disjointed Entanglements
Hi Deanie,DK with quick review on your poem. Poem written by a genius writer. That's what I want to say. It is a simple matter, but most things you successfully ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: What You've Done
Hi Pompadour,DK with quick review on your poem. Poem written by the seething emotions but still well controlled so that the reader does not slight disgust when reading it.Yet so ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: Persephone's Lament
Hi emmylou1995,DK with quick review on your poem. Exciting poem and written in narrative form. It provides plenty of space when you use the speaking style as the first person ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: When We Were New
Hi fortis,DK with quick review on your poem. I have no doubt that this poem is indeed very enthralling with the diction that beautify the meaning of the poem itself. ...
Oct 11, 2013
