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Re: Hopeless Opportunities
Hi Deane, Dream with review on your poem :) Interesting poem with a theme that revolves around the hopes and presented in narrative form. So I took my boat and ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Storm
Hi Amelia, Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day! Mysterious poem here. I wonder who makes him fear of his life. Not told, just ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Hero of Fereldan-Grimm Amell (mage)
Hi Dark Raven, Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day! I actually love the fantasy poem that gives ample space to the poet to ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Way You Say My Name
Hi TRtisara, Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day! I like the diction you use, because it really affects the tone of voice and ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Boys.
Hi GL Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day! This is so much beautiful! I could feel its strength and I'm overwhelmed. I like ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Conflict may be difficult to resolve.
Hi, Dream here with review on your essay. First of all, Happy Review Day! Very interesting essay to read here. Just let me review in any aspects that could give ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Cuando tengas alas
Hi emjayc Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day!. Reply on the A/N, I love grammar but she always tear me down! Straight to ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: In the End
Hi aouther2b, this is Dream with review on your poem. First of all, happy review day! I see that you tried to use rhythm in each lines of the poem. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Broken
Hi, Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day! I prefer read a simple poem which is written in a plain/ unfussy way but still ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Hybrids (chapter 1)
Hi, Dream here with review on your story. First of all, Happy Review Day! Honestly, I love this story. The storyline is clearly visible and attractive. There are fictional elements ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Song: Silently
Hi, Dream here with review on your lyric. First of all, Happy Review Day! I'm not sure if I can give the best review on this lyric, but I'll try ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: in the rafters
Hi Persy, Dream here with review on your poem. First of all, Happy Review Day! Your poem indeed need a sharp observation to approach connotation meaning behind the words chosen. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Silent Generation
Hi wewinwelose, Dream with review on your poem. . A poem with a donotation meaning in poem which is easy to understand because you using a simple words/ diction without ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Tendencies
Hi KaspynPaxian, very interesting poem to read here but I am I'm a little disturbed by the poem format/verses on each lines that are too long, though can be broken ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Hyssop and Vinegar
Hi Cole, Dream with review on your poem! Very interesting poem with different concept and amazing diction. I like what you want to point up here along with the implied ...
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