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Re: Not Just a Box Ch4
I just scrolled down here and saw GALLIFREY!!! This is a Doctor Who fanfiction? YESSSS! We need more of those. I'm extremely happy about this. Okay, I'll review it now... ...
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Re: Removed
Hello and Happy September Review Day!!! With him and Ameli, Sylvaris and Ameli, Louis and practically everyone...how were they going to get anything done if they couldn’t agree on anything? ...
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Re: Just Me, Myself, and I (Part 1 of 3)
Hello and Happy September Review Day!! I'll just type any thoughts and nitpicks I find as I read. Okay? Okay. :) So allons-y! x x x x x x x ...
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Re: MechWarrior (Summary of Plot, lead in for Chapter 1)
Hello! Happy September Review Day! I'm just going to type any thoughts that come to mind when I read your work, or any little nitpicks that I find. Okay, allons-y! ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Chapter !
Hello to you and Happy September Review Day!!! I just type my thoughts and any nitpicks that I find as I read. So let's go... allons-y! I sat on the ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Face of a Borg Chapter 3
Hello and Happy September Review Day!! I'm just going to type whatever thoughts and nitpicks come to my mind as I read this. x x x x x x x ...
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Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 8: Truth or Lie (part one)
Hello! Happy September Review Day! I'll just type down my thoughts as I read along. Okay? Okay. ;) The room looked familiar. She could not quite place her finger on ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Dreampeople, Part 1, Chapter 2
Hello! This is sooo big (for a screen at least) so I'll do my best. Sorry if I have to skip a few bits, that will be my eyes getting ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Revenge's Shadow Chapter 5
Hello to you and Happy September Review Day! Basically, I write down my thoughts as I read. So here goes... x x x x x x x x x x ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Strawberry Hearts -4-
Hello! Happy September Review Day! I feel like I've read another part of this story, anyway, I'll give it a go and review this for you. :) x x x ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Surreptitious Future
Hello! Happy September Review Day! I'm going to just write down any nitpicks I find as I read... x x x x x x x From the day I had ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 7
Hello! Happy September Review Day!! I review by writing down my thoughts as I read, so yeah, allons-y! ‘This isn’t the only pod here. We could sneak off and fly ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Cold Hands
Hell to you and *drum roll* Happy September Review Day!!! Nitpicks first. There aren't many though, seriously. Maybe by the time its dark you’ll be a bit calm Maybe the ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow- Chapter Thirteen
Hello! Happy September Review Day! I'll just be writing my thoughts as I go, but by the looks of it there isn't much wrong with this chapter. However, when I’m ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Midnight Dreams
Hello! Happy September Review Day! The first thing I notice when I look at your work is the lack of paragraphs. You really need to have smaller chunks of sentences. ...
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