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Re: the poet
Hello! I'm sorry but this review is going to be a terribly short one because... there is nothing that needs to be reviewed! To me, this poem is flawless. I ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: The Quest
Hello! Okay, so first of all I'd like to ask what exactly is the quest? Is the quest just the journey of life? Being knitted together as a baby and ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Simplicity
Hello! I'm super excited that this is a Sherlock fanfiction. But is it a Sherlock fanfiction? I'm talking about the BBC show called Sherlock, not the old books. I'm thinking ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Inglorious Affliction
Hello! This review is going to be an extremely short one because I'm not sure what to say! It's basically perfect; it sounds great, flows well and you haven't made ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 12
Heya! I haven't read your other chapters so I'll just look for nitpicks in this one. :) I make a silent wish that the storm doesn’t break since it looks ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Flashbacks-chapter 2
Heya! I haven't read chapter one and was a little confused with the start of the chapter. But then you mentioned what happened in the first chapter and I was ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Come Back
Ahhhh, Deanie, I love it! It's seriously amazing. I feel like it's a short story and poem in one piece. It's extremely sad as well, how at first she hates ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Proportion.
Hello! I'm here to review. I don't have too many nitpicks. The one thing you need to fix before you edit the story is the paragraphing. The chunks of sentences ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: *1* Schools Out
When I first started reading this I was thinking about how much I can relate to it. Then you mentioned the monsters and I got rid of that thought. :D ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Bumble Bee
Hello! I'm sorry but this review is going to be really short. I don't know what to pick on; if it was longer I would, but as it is the ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Back To Hell Trilogy - Part 1
Well, the story line is very good and extremely interesting! I don't have much to say about it; there's nothing wrong. I would like to know a little bit more ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Don't Mind Me
I like how you've centered the text, but I'm wondering if the first line (the title) is part of the poem? I read it as such, seeing as the style ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Nights Of New York- Chapter 1
This is the continuing chapter from the prologue that I read, right? Yay! I'll review it straight away. :) The first part was pretty good. You wrote a great description ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: A Cloudless Night
[b]Standing on a hill top On a cloudless night Is the best experience One could get at night It was the most beautiful sight I saw on the hill top ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Dreadnettle Hall #1
Hello! I love fairytales and I think that this is what you're writing. Seriously though, the way you've written it is amazing. It's all so whimsical, like an old fashioned ...
Oct 7, 2014
