Dracula

Another installment, excellent! And I'm the third reviewer this time? Sorry I'm late. :P The wonder on Gerry McCaw’s face was almost pure enough to excuse the early hour, in ...

Well this was a little hard to review, because it's difficult to tell how much is copied (both from the Bible and others' interpretations). Perhaps include a little bibliograhy? Anyway, ...

Ooh, you started it in second person! I thought that was done very well, I felt immersed and interested. For the sake of improvement, you could work on some descriptions ...

Thanks for keeping me up to date. :) Here's my rambling thoughts as I read... Chip was shouting to various workers around the edges of the room, initialising any sort ...

Hey there, AwkwardMeerkat! I'm here for a quick review. :D Your opening paragraph was very informative. I could imagine everything well. My only bit of criticism is the lab-like apartment ...

Hey there, Ventomology! Happy Review Day. :) There are a few areas where rewording could make the work smoother to read. This isn't a major problem, it would just help ...

Hey, Steam! Here are some of my thoughts on your notes. Your female characters all have pretty unusual names, as far as names go. Then your main is just called ...

Hey KaraStevens, I'm here to review since you asked for it. :D This story is gruesome, but it works well. Your use of the notes instead of straight out speaking ...

Willard, I love the title of this so much. It could be a piece of poetry by itself. It definitely made me want to read this, so it did its ...

Hey, Tortwag! It's okay if it's not finished. I posted my short story as well just because it was Review Day. :) You've done well so far. I knew I ...

Hey there, RoseTulipLily! I'm not that great at reviewing poetry but I wanted to give it a go since you gave me such a helpful review on my short story. ...

Hey there, Ferruccio! I'll start off with listing the things I noticed as I read... Rachel had never been so embarrassed. This was a great way to begin. You dive ...

Here are my rambling thoughts once more... Just yesterday I was walking by the university and an arm of brick spouted out of a wall, handing me a note with ...

Hey there, jimss23, and Happy Review Day!! Light cracked through the window in Shujaa's room. Shujaa opened his eyes. He had been quietly meditating before the light of dawn came ...

I want to review this but I don't really know how! I can relate to this a lot in my own way. That's what I like about it, it's a ...