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Re: Love Is Deeper
Hey! Your song sounds great and I don't have any nitpicks at all. I‘ve seen the explanations for so many things so far Like why the sky is blue and ...
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Re: A Second Chance!
Greetings, earthling. I've come to review. :D I haven't read the original poem, so forgive me if I don't understand some things, but I'll endeavor to read it. *reading* This ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Black Fire - Chapter 2
Heya, ConfusedGlasses!Your chapter was great! It was interesting, exciting and a lot happened in it. Your descriptions were also great and you wrote the speech in a convincing way. I ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Unblocking the writer's block
Heya, DrFeelGood. This was a really humorous yet informative piece and it was a pleasure to read. :D I shall definitely take some of your advice. Since this already has ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: surreal drabble
Her fingers were a needle, and the keyboard thread. Sunflowerr, I actually love this sentence (I mean quote ) so much! This should literally be on a t-shirt. This line ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Grace in Diction
It's pretty cool how you wrote a poem... about poetry. Because even though some might call it an essay, it is indeed poetry that you've written. The imagery, metaphors and ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Nia Knows
Heya, MsJesi and welcome to the Young Writer's Society! Thank you for sharing your writing. :D You've got this in the 'other' category, but I actually think it could make ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: I Don't Kiss & Tell
Heya, Kimblekr and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you're enjoying yourself here. :D Woah. You did a great job writing this! You described a whole evening of ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: You Can't Buy Me
Heya, wisegirl. :D Your golden hair once brought my legs out from under me and I fell. You split this sentence is the best place possible. I paused between the ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: A Bus Story
Heya, Olga! I'm here to review. :D First up I'll go through some nitpicks, then I'll tell you what I liked. And that case wasn't different, or so I thought ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Luck Found
You found a four leaf clover on Friday the 13th? Well, my mother did always say it was a lucky day, but I never believed her until now. :D There's ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Why They Left EachOther(#1)
My first thought when I read the title: Why did they leave each other? The title got my attention and it made me desperately want to read on and find ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Absolute Depth
Hello! I'll do my best to write a helpful review, but there's not really anything that needs to be corrected (in my opinion at least)! At first glance I thought ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: L'appel du vide
French: "the call of the void" or, the impulsive feeling to leap off a high cliff. (yes, that's a near-literal translation) Where did you even here that? :p If the ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Love (Through the Eyes of a Gamer)
Okay, this is getting suspicious. All the well-written, YWS famous poems seem to be written by a user called Odd (I was about to type Ood, oops). How are you ...
Mar 26, 2015
