Dracula

Hey there, themightierpen. I love your username! :) This was an extremely emotional poem. I was able to relate to it, having felt some of those things, but I also ...

Hey again, Haiimthomas. :) I read part one so of course, I have to come and read part two! One would not expect a day to arrive so perfectly to ...

Hey there, RoyalHighness! I like the overall story of this poem and the emotions it conveys, the emotions actually come across really well. It's a sweet poem, and I love ...

Hey, MrMuddyPig! It's Dracula again. :D Although I don't really like any politicians, Bernie Sanders is one who I could possibly tolerate, so I thought I'd give this a read. ...

Here I am, straight from part four. :) I stepped inside Marv’s little after noon. This sentence is missing something because it doesn't quite make sense. Perhaps it needs a ...

Hey there, mihaivisan! I'm curious to know, are these 'parts' actually chapters? Or is this story a novella which you've split into different parts for ease of reviewing? Not that ...

Hey there, PatatoInParis. :D This is a pretty small chapter, but it did cover everything that a first chapter should. It introduces your main character, Violet, and tells us how ...

Hey there, Nildabeast! I was interested in reading this because of your description; isn't it an awesome feeling when inspiration just hits you like that? :) He was weighed down ...

Hey there, Kazeybear! Thanks for sharing this extremely emotional poem. While it's still on my mind, I just wanted to mention an idea that came to me. Completely by accident, ...

Hey there, RachitBansal. I see that you only recently joined the Young Writers Society, so welcome! I hope you're enjoying your time here. :) First of all, let me say ...

Hey there, Brave0Heart066! I'm here to give you another review, hopefully it'll help. Why Is It such an ordeal to gain the attention This is more of a personal question ...

Greetings, oh lady Artemis. *bows* "Silena!" Leia cried, groping in the darkness for her friend's hand. "Bianca!" Don't feel discouraged that I'm beginning this with a nitpick, I just like ...

Hello, Centurion! Date: A months after it happened Heads up that you added an unnecessary S in month. :) I really like how you begin with a briefing of the ...

Hey there, Haiimthomas, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! The first thing I noticed was the massive paragraphs towards the end of your chapter/part. Before I even begin reading ...

Hey there, DoulosForChrist, and a slightly belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! :) I really liked the format you've chosen to follow, with its super short lines and repetitiveness. ...