Dracula

Hey there, Jenika! Dracula has come to review your writing on this dark, rainy Review Day. ;) Well, it's dark and rainy for me, at least. "C'mon Eve, I promise ...

Hey there, AshleyDashley! Happy Review Day. :) I love your use of rhyming. It's actually pretty rare to see a piece of poetry on Yewis that focusses so much on ...

Hey there, KanekiManjushage! Happy Review Day! :D When she went out into the empty street, silenced, forlorn amid a seething noon, her steps sounded like thunder. She became frightened by ...

Hey there, DreamingForever, and Happy Review Day! You start right in the middle of the action (well, even towards the end of the action) and this is a risky move ...

Hey there, acm, and Happy Review Day! Though this was a very short piece, I found it to be a very enjoyable read. I even found it a little relatable. ...

Hey there, TheOneNamedZoe, and Happy Review Day! Having not read the other chapters, I'll just focus on nitpicks and grammar sorts of things. Curious, she walked towards the inhabitant's area. ...

Hey there, AnonymousPerson! I thought your poem was pretty cool, especially the subject. I love the idea of the clock, ticking away, giving the person a wider view of their ...

Hey there, XxXTheSwordsmanXxX! There were a couple times that he was given food and then a few minutes later fed again and had to scramble to keep from dropping the ...

Hey there, JuliasSneezer! I just figured out your username, love it. XD “I know you are mad at us,” Ackerley began. “And you have every right to be. But we- ...

Hey there, haredrier! I'm here to review your chapter. :) His right eye seemed to be adjusting faster to the light, and as his pupil turned to a needle-thin slit ...

Hey there, Zee6! I'm back to review this next part. :) “Seems like we only have two left.” Arthur stood and looked at the two. When you start a new ...

I'm here because you asked for help. :) I'll just jot anything I find as I read instead of following an actual reviewing structure. It is harder for me to ...

Hey there, Zee6! I really like the language you've used here. It's simple but descriptive and suits the piece well. I love history, and your story successfully delivered me into ...

Hey there, AsTheFlowersGrow! I have to admit that I find Tony to be a funny name for a spider. But hey! He's your spider, and I can't think of a ...

Hey there, LeutnantSchweinehund, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! The first paragraph is very majestically written, with a real 'fairy tale' and 'ancient legend' style of writing. It may ...