Dracula

Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this. Your writing style, overall, is pretty great in my opinion. You have a good ratio of dialogue, action and narrative. Your characters are ...

Hey there, Lubbeljl, and Happy Review Day! Someplace where the other girls didn't know the difference between tulips and roses. This isn't really a nitpick, just an idea I wanted ...

I don't have anything major to point out, I love this piece a lot. There's just a couple things... For some reason, I feel more composed, and honest, and more ...

You asked for a review so here I am. There's a few things I noticed... I was tapping my beak against the shell that surrounded me. I was almost out ...

Hey there, TheStormAroundMe, and Happy Review Day! I'll type down my thoughts as I read. :) t least he had the good sense to be there for a child that ...

Hey there, NympheaLily. You asked for reviews so here I am. :) only have a limited amount of time with this microphone, so listen up punks. I loved the introduction. ...

Hey there! The five of them standing there ought to have looked impressive, Margo thought. They were dressed in dark grey uniforms, made up of a thick woollen jacket, a ...

Should I even go into little nitpicks? I don't know, but you might help you so I might as well. The lights on the ceiling flickered and hung down by ...

The way you started this was great; you summarised the tricky situation with all those questions, and showed how awful it was with details such as no sunlight. Your writing ...

Don't be sorry for tagging me so much! I honestly love your Rick Riordan fanfictions. Sure, they might not be Shakespeare, but neither is Uncle Rick's writing. You capture the ...

Thanks for tagging me! Here are all my random thoughts as I read this... The lack of capitalisation, in my opinion, represents how broken Luke was. The whole pace of ...

Hey there, you ridiculously muddy pig! :p I'll start with things I particularly liked, and then go over some nity-pickies. My mom and I were walking across the melting snow ...

Here I am as you requested. :D I love the first paragraph. It's straight to the point and tells me that something isn't right, that Novah's in some sort of ...

'Tis me once more. I am was the camp's best mechanic. They say said I can could make anything. My skills are were unlimited. I think I'm still getting used ...

No, this is a nice length! Not too long at all. Just one nitpick, but overall I love it. I especially love the list in the second half, it's a ...