Djinn

Okay, I agree with aqua1213. This is highly confusing, which is why it has so few reviews, most likely. I don’t even understand what it is talking about, let alone ...

I like it. I feel like there is potential. I don’t think it is at its best, but I think with a like work it can become great. I really ...

Well, that was interesting. I always love a good information dump. I take them all the time. It really helps with the formation of an idea, especially if you aren’t ...

Wow, that was deep. It was so deep it hurt. I feel like crying and I don’t even know why. I really liked you imagery and the feeling that conveyed ...

Wow. This is amazing. I must say, even though I have not read any other of your work, I do have to say this is pretty cool. There were only ...

Wow. I really like this. For me, personally, have other people tell me what they thought of my poetry it help to affirm or not whether I was spot on ...

My first question is why you numbered the sentences. It was really good and quite fun to read. There are only a couple of things I’d like to point out ...

I’m sorry. I had to stop in the middle of finishing this because it hurt. First of all, you took this whole idea from the British show Sherlock (down to ...

Wow, there has been a lot of poetry today! Well, I just want to say, it's a cool analogy and at the beginning I totally saw what you were saying...but ...

Wow. That was awesome. Though I can't actually read Shelta, it still all sounded cool. One comment: why was mountain capitalized? Was it supposed to stand out of was that ...

I really like the description in much of you stanzas. Poetry is always hard to judge not just because it is personal but also because each person 'should' take something ...

Um....okay. You can....work with this. I guess you probably know from school that you made a lot of grammar mistakes so I'll just focus on the story itself. A lot ...

"Why you? Why anybody?" - famous quote from Slaughterhouse 5. I like how you started each line started with 'Why' so the last line stands out from the rest. I ...

XD Well, that was quite interesting. It seemed to have a ryhthm of its own even though you didn't want it to ryhm. By the way, why would you not ...

Hey! I love your poem! I did have a hard time coming up with the rythm. I felt it should have more of a beat especially when it is a ...