DiamondForce99

Great job. I can't find anything to suggest or critique. I really enjoyed the humorous tone and the rhyme scheme. If I was you I would keep writing at 11 ...

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I like the criticism. It makes me better writer. I literally wrote this last night at 4 in the morning si I knew it work be rough. Thank you.

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This piece of flash fiction was hard to keep in form. I had to break my repetition at the end but I didn't know how. It's not my favorite writing ...

I read this whole thing easily. I found it super interesting and I don't even know what to say... Maybe thank you is a start. Thank you for reminding me ...

Thank you! Yes my intention was that they died in a car crash. My idea was in the first two stanzas they were alone watching the stars and then the ...

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I used the word emotions to make a connection with the title. The first few lines have feelings in them and I wanted to state that she also has emotions. ...

Thank you so much! That was the point of my poem that it meant something to everyone. There is no specific subject. For me it was depression and suicidal thoughts. ...

Thank you for your review! To be honest it was my creative writing assignment. There were requirements about how many lines per stanzas and the twist ending. I really enjoyed ...