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Heyyy! Lifting me so high until her spells bound me sleeping. My favorite part! Nice opening line. I really enjoyed your style of writing. To me, it is very descriptive ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! Excellent review. You gave a lot of good information enough for me to decide if I want to read it or not. Actually, I think ...

Hello! This is a gem of a story! He had always thought his soulmate would be an impatient woman. Maybe a little cranky because she hadn't slept as much as ...

Hey! Let’s jump right into chapter one! The nice lady who sat next to Cleo on the plane helped her get her purple suitcase out from the overhead compartment. Nice ...

Hey! It's been a while since I've reviewed anything, so I'm little rusty. Okay, good start with the opening. I like the concept of sky kingdoms! It's interesting, and I ...

Hello! The wind gently cascades her soft, delicate, golden hair in smooth waves I don't think you need the third comma unless you add 'and.' put on my white mask ...

Hello! I have never truly liked math either, so I agree with your sentiments. On an unrelated note, I have always hated how messing up one part of an equation ...

Hello! Alex came in with two needles and syringes. This freaked me out for a moment because I'm not too fond of needles either. I was like what the heck? ...

My mind does not know blindness. I really like this, and I personally think it would make a great opening line. I just adore the first two paragraphs, reading how ...

Hello! I definitely agree with GowthamBouddha and Wolfgang87 because I found the poem to be inspirational as well. Love how the zebras are described as resilient no matter their oppressors. ...

Hello! Birds are small, flying sacks of meat that have pointed faces, and if you so much as look at them the wrong way, their actions may be unpredictable Oh, ...

Hello! I jump down rabbit holes and dance in fairy rings. My fingers turn dusty pages, looking for a sign, a spell, a map. I never find anything. My favorite ...

Hello! Something about the crisp autumn air, the earthy smell of dead leaves and fabric softener, just melts my butter. ... Just melts my butter Girl, what? XD I really ...

Hello! What a nice short story! I thought the same that if the princess honestly just liked him that not having the opal shouldn't matter. I would say adding more ...

Hello! yes, there are still people doing good in the world even if i can't agree with them can't love as they love can't live as they live I found ...